Reviews for Harry Won't Take No

BY : JustAWhat


  • From Sera21 on April 02, 2019

    Not a bad couple of fics. I particularily enjoy the more incesty ones: wish you had done more with that kink. Its well written, not for everybody but hope you continue. Also, and this is just a personal opinion, but I wouldn"t have put the scat chapter in the first place. Its probably the kink that will squick most people so you might want to bring that in later.



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  • From raymareme on March 29, 2019

    I think you need a beta or to use grammarly. 

     

    Good plot though. 



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