Reviews for Hold on Tight

BY : cls2256

  • From saxman66 on June 18, 2019

    Good chapter and great to see more of the story. Quite a lot happening and while its a relatively small matter I hope Fletcher gets his comeuppance for that theft.


    Awkward that Sirius has a lot of value in that safe but Allie can't get to it.


    Very likely with the fact there are real scum in Azkaban that he would run into problems with old 'friends' and a good job he wasn't worse hurt.


    Glad of that last section with the reveal as to why Slade was willing to take Sirius's case pro bono . I was wondering what his motive was and worried that he had somewhat darker a motive.

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  • From saxman66 on May 31, 2019

    Well some dramatic developments and still unclear why Sirius has been arrested again. The idea he's guilty of breaking out when he should never have been in there in the 1st place is pretty feeble. Although at least there is mention of a trial. And at least Allie's mum seems to be defrosting enough that she actually gives a damn about her again.


    Suspect things are coming to a climax but going to be tough with the apparent power that their enemies still have to get out of this. Also I wonder if the dementors are going to be the only problems Sirius has to fear while he's back in jail. :(

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  • From saxman66 on May 19, 2019

      Well that's a sudden and nasty switch.  I wonder what's going on.  Most obvious thing might be Voldamort and his DE's using their powers to remove a potentially dangerous opponent.

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  • From saxman66 on May 07, 2019

    Good chapter and romantic scene even if Sirius came off 2nd best to Jack in the fight. I have the feeling its not going to be the last time he causes problems however. :(

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  • From saxman66 on April 25, 2019

    Well it sounds like Arthur is talking security seriously given the current situation. :)


    I'm wondering if the disappearance of Allie's favourite supplier of ice cream means someone is trying to find out more about her and Sirius? That would definitely be a concern.


    Anyway a good chapter with some useful developments and other than Sirius's understandable anger at not having Harry for the summer, although there seems to be a good reason for it, he actually seems to be happy for most of the chapter. Which is a definite improvement.

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  • From saxman66 on April 22, 2019

    Damn that was close. Been a bit distracted and only noticing the new story today. Normally look out for the embodied titles of stories I've read before.


    Great to see this back. A bit surprised that things are so calm at the moment with the ongoing war and that they are able to think of relatively peaceful things. Plus thinking that Sirius and Allie could be prominent targets of Voldamort and his death eaters but at least their been able to relax a bit.


    Colleen is being a right fool at the moment but at least Allie's siblings seem to understand and hopefully she will wake up to the fact her daughter is happy and well cared for. Sirius is having to get used to the idea of growing up himself, which he's finding a struggle but is making progress. ;)

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