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By : Luckycharms
  • From saxman66 on November 10, 2019

     

    Oops! Well that did it. Just the thing when your in Salem in the middle of the witch trials, to start casting spells Draco! Especially when a very poisonous little bitch can see it. Its going to be messy now.

     

    Not sure why Hermione still seems so much in denial and it has fouled things up here. Can't see Draco being so reckless if he hadn't been so upset. Also since Draco has been seized I would expect that the villagers will be after the rest of the party. No doubt assuming that their all involved in some dark magic, given their suspicious arrival and the ongoing witch trials.

     

    It sounds rather like Julia is the member of Osiris's family as she fits the description, “innocent yet bold “ Also given her reaction to Draco's Patronus I think she will risk everything and speak up in his defence. Not sure how their going to sort this mess out but be interesting to see what you come up with. From the comment about how many people Ann accused OTL it sounds like she's still got some way to go so I can't see them being able to make her responsible and stop the killings. Although that would fit in with their need “To be the change is the key “ as well as change themselves.

     

    I'm a bit weirded out by the idea of Harry and Ron sharing a bed by the sound of it. Seems strange that even if their sharing the same room there aren't two beds there. However it was hilarious Ron finding out that it wasn't Harry he has come into contact with when he returned to their room! :D

     

    As I may have said I'm not a great expert on the Potterverse but it sounds like Draco is surprised that he can produce a Patronus because he was formally, albeit somewhat reluctantly, a Death-eater.

     

    Well I didn't notice any modern political references in the previous chapter, albeit that I can be pretty naive about such things. When as a youth I read Isaac Asimov's “Currents of Space” novel I utterly failed to realise it was based on plantation slavery in the old US south until reading about it a little while back which resulted in a sudden Duh!! ;) Mind you I suspect in most such cases people see what they expect/want to regardless of what you say. Wouldn't worry about it at all if I was you.

     

    Fully agree with what you say to Keiara. I'm not exactly in the 1st flush of youth :( shall we say but still have no problem enjoying a good story.

     

    Anyway another good chapter. Looking forward to seeing how the gang get out of this mess in the next few episodes.


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  • From Keiara_Brinn on November 08, 2019

    Sweet Circe! Ok I know I am older and am not supposed to enjoy this as much as I do but they way you have the group travelling through time is addicting. Can not wait to see how this story concludes! 


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  • From 1_luv215 on November 07, 2019

    The way you are able to tell a story and make the reader feel like we are actualy in it is captivating. I love what you did with these last two time periods. Quick and to the point but still able to offer some important things along the way. Poor Harry, I can't imagine the pain he is feeling and Theo I pitty the kid as he didn't know a simple bet would land everyone where they are now. It's unfortunite. I can't wait until the next update though! If I were to guess the clue I'd say Salem. I hope I'm right becasue I haven't read a good Salem Dramione yet and I'm interested to see where and how you handle that era. I will say though that I fear for the four and hope they all make it out alive. but with how you are taking this story I'm scared one or more might be in trouble.


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  • From saxman66 on November 03, 2019

     

      Very good, although I was expecting some adventures on the Queen Anne's Revenge.  A bit surprised that Hermione had such a good memory of history without checking her book.  I might have guessed where they we're if I remembered the name of his ship but not what it was called before and would have been only within a decade or so of the time.

     

    Well I think I know where their going next and some idea of what they have to do. However in case by any chance I'm actually correct and you don't want me saying too much I'll send a private mail.

     

    I know your linking up Hermione and Draco and also Ginny and Blaise but are you continuing the construction of the Slytherin-Gryffindor alliance with a Patsy-Harry link up? ;)

     


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  • From 1_luv215 on October 27, 2019

    WOW!  Ok where do I even begin? That was a lot for one chapter and my god I loved it so much! Molly and Narcissa's fight was very well done but Harry! Harry my man came out of no where and shut them down perfectly! I got so excited when he announced himself and began ripping into them!

    And holy hell I was not expecting Rowle of all people to help them! That backstory was fire! I have no idea how you came up with it let alone make it a cliffhanger IN THE MIDDLE OF THE CHAPTER which it almost never done! But BRAVO! That was awesome! And Luna! God I love her and her weirdness. I wonder what is going to happen next. Will Harry finally tell the group what he experienced and saw? Is Thorfinn really there to helped them or does he have other sinister motives? Where are the people in the past going to next? What are the 5 Big Ones!? I have so many questions I honeslty am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter!

    And the connection to Draco! I am dying to know how that will play out and how it will effect Harry! I am so nervous for the four lost in the past! This is by far the best Dramione story I have read yet!


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  • From saxman66 on October 27, 2019

    Ah so, you believe in the old Chinese curse - “may you live in interesting times.” So its a case of solving some riddle that they won't get until the amulet has repaired itself. Then at least 5 more leaps and issues to resolve before they can come home. With a chance if one of them does something wrong trapping all four of them in that era for the rest of their lives. Nasty.

     

    If not giving too much away, in which case it will be wait and see - Thorfinn says he and Regulus when they were affected by the amulet the 1st place was back when it was 1st created by Osiris and they spoke to him. Is that going to happen to our 4 travellers or do you have something different planned for them?

     

    They were lucky to avoid the 1622 massacre although it was definitely traumatic for them while also their now thinking about a possible future problem with Blaise's colour. Suspect its going to be a problem at some point, unless of course you reverse the theme and have a chapter where being white would be dangerous and Blaise has to help the other three. ;)

     

    Anyway have to see what develops and from what Thorfinn said there's 2-3 more jumps before the amulet repairs itself, gives them the riddle and then they have at the least the 5 big ones. Looking forward to seeing what develops. :)

     


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  • From 1_luv215 on October 26, 2019

    You are a doll! So much has happened so far and I can't wait to see what happenes next!


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  • From saxman66 on October 20, 2019

    Well Harry sick but hopefully will pull through. The good news is that the gang are leaving London and more importantly the plague behind, although I doubt it will be that comfortable wherever their going. Just hopefully not as lethal.

     

    Hermione and Draco are still letting their pride and doubt get in the way and Ginny at least is still totally oblivious about Blaise. However the 1st two are making some progress and that is obviously having some affect on the state of the amulet. I'm guessing its only going to take them home when its fully repaired, which could also take some time. I also have a feeling what unpleasant circumstances will be required to change Ginny's attitude towards Blaise.

     


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  • From goddess-of_dragons on October 20, 2019

    Intersting chapter. I like how you gave them a little bit of a "break" even if it was during the bubonic plague. They didnt have to fight and had a chance to heal and rest before going back at it. I hope Hermione doesnt take her sweet time in fogiving him. I have to say that they are my favorite fanfic couple. Whether this story has lemons or not, i will continue to read it because you are a great rider and have sucked me in. :)


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  • From Luckycharms on October 16, 2019

    @Saxman66- Very true, but I didn't want them to use magic during that part because I wanted to show Draco's temper and kick the door in.

    @Goddess-of_Dragons- Awe thank you Love! I do still need to one day go back and edit 1912 lol. I just don't know when that will be. I'm glad you like this story so far. My beta and I have worked very hard to bring something different to the table and it has been a rough road trying to get everything right since it's not just a single era like most TT stroies. Though, I have learned a lot of information on top of it all haha!

    @Juerasana- Thank you Lovely! I hope you enjoyed Repeat After Me, that so far is my best work according to a lot readers on other sites. However, I do need to go back over all my stories one day and re edit them again, so don't judge them too harshly lol

    @1_Luv215- You are awesome! I love that you made an account just to review every chapter and love each one as well. I can't thank you enough for that :)


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  • From 1_luv215 on October 16, 2019

    Well that was intense. But yay Dramione moments! Can't wait to see what happens next!


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  • From kierasama on October 15, 2019

    I am loving this story! Just binge read all your other stories as well. Can't wait to read what happens!


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  • From goddess-of_dragons on October 13, 2019

    Im beginning to like this story as much as your 1912 story. Every sunday i check back to see if you have updated and everytime you do i drop what im doing to sit down and read it. And every sunday im more anxious for the next chapter. I cant wait to see where they landed this time and if harry will be okay. I loving getting reviews and am horrible about review but thats going to change :). 


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  • From saxman66 on October 13, 2019

    Well that was close. I suspect they could have used more magic as apart from the low probability of anyone seeing them surviving their probably not likely to be believed. Alternatively if they were it might be thought some gods or demigods were sighted, although doing what would be a matter of question.

     

    Harry when he recovers has a bit of a story to tell about the four travellers and some idea where their been. However how will he tell the families what he saw at the end, especially how friendly the four are looking. That could cause some disputes.

     

    If I read it rightly the four are now in/heading for London, although at what time period we don't know yet. Plus I suspect their going to have some discussions of their own about what happened in those last few minutes. All of then could be in denial for at least a while longer however I suspect.

     

      Another good chapter. :D


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  • From 1_luv215 on October 11, 2019

    I can't...That chapter...was AMAZING! I can't even begin to express how grateful I am that I found this story. You're writing style is awesome and it makes me feel like I am actually in the past with the group. I don't know where you get you ideas for your stories but please DO NOT ever stop sharing them! I tried writing once and it is so difficult i actually gave up but seriously many many props to you and your beta. You are killin it! I am so excited and nervous to see what happens next. Sunday can't come soon enough!


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