Reviews for Harry Potter and the Perfect Wife

BY : Spurge_Laurel

  • From Pixel-King on March 24, 2021

    Fun and creative story. Well written, though I wish there was a tad more explanation of Harry's anomalous abilities. And that it described some of that "turnabout is fair play" happening "multiple times a day" in more saucy detail. This is ADULT-fanfiction after all, and you've made them such enjoyable characters.

    I like so many things about this story, and remember when it was first posted. It was a pleasant surprise to see this oneshot updated. I really hope you continue it!

    I especially liked the opening of chapter two echoing the first. If you do a time skip eventually, starting with their child would be fun. Maybe Lily or something less cliché, Artemis, Lara, Maera, and Moria are other naiads or are related to Daphne in Greek Mythology. Daphne seems the type to demand to name their daughter.

    "Maera could have been the perfect daughter."

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  • From saxman66 on March 24, 2021

      I thought the 1st chapter was hilerious but this was even better.  Guessed what was wrong with Daphnie, as it was fairly predictable but wonder how she will react now.  Loved the little distraction with Merlin. :)

      Its only taken 3 years for her to realise how lucky she is but will she finally accept that she does care for Harry. 

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  • From DEVIOUS_WRITER on December 03, 2020

    great story had me laughing in tears , thank you 

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  • From InvidiaRed on November 09, 2020

    <3 I love this story.

    I laughed so hard I cried

    Cause she's like why won't you die?  Even if she's still in the denial part.

    10/10 <3

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