Reviews for Harry’s Undoing

BY : BrokenHolly

  • From Jan on January 07, 2021

    Oh can't wait for Toms fun time to begin, please update chapter 6 soon.

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  • From DampGusset on January 03, 2021

    Another great chapter. I adore this story and can't wait for the next installment. Looking forward for the next step in Holly's transition.

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  • From Jeda26 on January 02, 2021

    Hot Damn and god have been y, that was another fantastically kinky and brilliantly wanton gem of a chapter that deliciously erotically pushes Holly past another important landmark in becoming whom she is meant to be. As she freely services Ron of her own free and becomes a sexy slut in his eyes to be used as nd ducked.


    Esgerly looking forward to seeing what happens next that now Tom has both sexy sultry redhead sluts in his grasp and under his spell to use snd shuse for a short while.

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  • From Wimp36 on December 31, 2020

    Holy hell, this is great. Keep it going! Please!

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  • From Jeda26 on December 10, 2020

    Hot damn and god have mercy. That was another scintillating titillating and gorgeously glorious sexy bombshell of a new chapter. 

    Holly and Ginny are totally and complete under Snape's sexual spell and loving every minute of it. Though think Holly needs some further training and transformation before coming out as a girl.  As Christmas holidays have a week or two to run, so there is plenty of time for her to find out what the potion is doing, request certain more enhancements in certain areas, find out about her covk becoming her clit and showing her love for Snape turning up and stripteasing as a sexy saucy naughty Santa. Plus even do some sexy role play dressed up pretending to be her mother getting married to Severus after ditching his father for the better man. 

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  • From Jan on December 10, 2020

    Wonder how everyone will take Harry turning into Holly, please update chapter 5 soon.

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  • From Jan on December 09, 2020

    Oh, Tom is gonna play with the girls too 😈, please update chapter 4 soon.

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  • From Jeda26 on December 08, 2020

    Oh my God and hot damn. That was a smokingly hot and wantonly intriguing gem of a alluring filler chapter. As Holly continues to fall further down the rabbit hole of Snape's machinations and schemes. So much so that she is already beginning to act, think, dress and behave as the ultimate sissy as well as starting to grow breasts. Starting on the road to becoming a beautiful femme fatale of a sissy girl and goddess. 

    Very eager to see what happens next as Holly and Ginny surrender themselves to the sexual mercies of Diary Tom and just he has in store for them and what price they have to paid to get it: lids of sexual virginity. 

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  • From Jan on December 06, 2020

    Interesting story, I'm absolutely loving this new Holly character, though I do wonder why Harry has such a small pickle? Please update chapter 3 soon.

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  • From Jeda26 on November 30, 2020

    Oh my word, that was another sensationally gloriously gorgeous and wickedly wantonly alluring erotic gem of a new chapter. Harry, sorry Holly is falling into the perfect headspace for Snape to carry forward and continue turning Harry into the perfect feminised sissy femme fatale replacement for his lost love. Particularly loved how Harry/Holly is already completely under his thrall that he readily acquises and adapts to acting and dressing like a sexy naughty school girl with the hots for her teacher and pleasuring him as he desires. 

    Well, well that is a game changer of a scene with Ginny finding out about Garty and Snape's secret. Wonder if she will be discovered straight away and become another pawn in Snape's plans to corrupt and convert Garry into Holly. Or if she escapes discovery and uses her knowledge to blackmail Harry into being her lover as well at a later date.


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  • From Jeda26 on November 29, 2020

    Hot damn and god have mercy. That was  stunningly sublime and gorgoeusly glorious, wantonly kinky, erotically alluring start to what I sure will an absolute gem of a sissy Harry story. Utterly looking forward to seeing what Snape has in store for Harry next and how far he manages to corrupt and transform Harry into his perfect obediant feminised cock slut, sissy femboy by the time school starts again and whether he is driven by taking advantage of and using the boy' perversions to turn Harry into a replacement for his lost love, a beautiful young red head or raven haired version of Lily as well as means to get vengence on Harry's father.  

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