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Reviews for The Bar

By : hedwig_927
  • From ANON - Nari-Chan on August 14, 2021

    This was a great chapter and Ron acted just as i expected I hope he chills out and and eventually accept them and see that Harry is happy, also I am glad Hermione is not pregnant I have always never thought that they were right for each other polor opposites and Ron has always been a bit too hot headed and  possessive. This is just my opinion but  I'd love to see Hermione with someone who challenges her and pushes her not holds her back as Ron does in my option. Ok off my soap box lol please update again soon I can't wait ,🙃


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  • From Smile317 on August 13, 2021

    Yeah it was me. Sometimes I don't notice I haven't logged in. 🤪.  I'm always a fan of the fluff.   It's going to make a tough working environment if Ron doesn't come around. I understand his side and that he was worried about Hermione but I'm still disappointed in him. He needs to grow up.  Looks like the maybe the "I love you"s are starting to get close??  Sigh......  But again all the unanswered questions keeping me on the edge. Harry's mysterious house, Draco's mysterious client. 😳. And you can't forget Lucius lurking in the background. So much to think about. Can't wait until the next chapter. 😁


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  • From BooBack on August 05, 2021

    Hiiii! I've finally just made it through those two beasts of chapters. There was so much going on and I loved it all and of course the smut was... *chef's kiss*

    As always, looking forward to more and I'm so glad that you enjoy my stories as well. 😁


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  • From ANON - Nari-Chan on August 01, 2021

    I'd love to read the one shots you wrote and can't wait to read the next chapter!!!

     


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  • From ANON - on July 31, 2021

    🤯😳 I'm blown away. So many unanswered questions-I can't handle it. 🤪 I don't know even where to start thinking.  And I'm with Draco, don't like the yelling but I do like the making up part.  And Harry needs to tell Ron and Hermione. "No more secrets".  Great chapter. Never too long. And yes, please post those one-shots. And Happy Harry birthday to you too. 


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  • From goddess-of_dragons on July 26, 2021

    Left on the edge as always!!! 🙂 Get chapter!!! I think that Hermione shouldn't get pregnant just yet just because of the tension it will have on everyone. I can NOT wait for the next chapter to find out what happenes


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  • From Smile317 on July 23, 2021

    A shit ton of smut 😂 I'm not complaining 😁. And it's never too long. I love your stories. I really like the part where he "accidentally" realized he fancied Draco.  Laughed at that one. I'm happy they're finally officially together though now nervous for what's going to come out of the house investigation.  I vote for Hermione not being pregnant but using the scare as a good chance for them to actually talk and figure out what they both need to move forward together.  Also can't wait for Ron to find out about Draco. And I remember we can't forget about Lucius either though he can stay gone. So many things to think about. Can't wait for the next chapter. 🤪


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  • From BooBack on July 17, 2021

    Did you just rip a pillow open with all this fluff? Absolutely loving the way their relationship is evolving and can't wait for more. 😁 

    I think you can keep the title as the establishments are called pubs yes, but where you order drinks/food is still called the bar and since that's where the original argument took place, I think it fits. 😊 


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  • From Smile317 on July 16, 2021

    Vacation was great but so was getting to read your story when I got back.  I find it amazing that you're 21 and such a good writer. I remember my 21-year old self and I wasn't nearly as accomplished. That being said, I think you should keep the title. It's fine. I also love fluff and it was a fun chapter including the cat. 😂. Also don't be worried about writing the smut, it was great. Can't wait to see what happens next and when Harry finds out what pink really means. Thanks for a great night back home....still feels a little bit like vacation. 😁


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  • From BooBack on July 09, 2021

    Thanks for these great updates. I've been super busy so didn't get a chance to read until now. I'm not a big fan of angst but I understand that it's needed sometimes to move the story along and I think it was just the right amount in this chapter. Also lots of sexy and sweet bits. Loving it and looking forward to more. 😊


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  • From Smile317 on July 07, 2021

    Again wow. And the up and down emotions. Angst makes my heart cry but I know it has to be part of every story. Sigh.......  

    Still love your work and the chapters aren't too long. Still love the smut🤪 but the storyline is very good too. Now the question is Harry going to save Draco from his father or is Draco going to save himself. Just want them to end up happy (even if it takes 20 chapters to get there) 🥲

    One more thing. I'm going away until the 19th without my tablet so I won't be able to review right away. Doesn't mean I'm losing interest. Will definitely be one of the first things I do when I get back. 😁


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  • From Smile317 on July 01, 2021

    Yay! fluff and smut (and damp knickers 🤪) . The perfect way to end a bad work day.  I love this story. I'm such a sucker for the happy-feel good stories and I can't wait to see what new stories you cooking up now.  But still can't wait to see where this one goes. I have to give you credit. I admire anyone who's willing to put the time and effort in to make other people happy with their words and not get paid for the time they spend and for that I thank you. Looking forward to getting lost in your world at the end of the day makes me smile during the day.  Alas I wish I was able to write fiction but that's not meant to be. So I'll keep enjoying your work. Thank you. 😁


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  • From goddess-of_dragons on July 01, 2021

    OMG I love this story. Can wait till you update again because you have got me hooked!


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  • From BooBack on June 30, 2021

    I like how they are airing out their differences but also having a bit of fun. 😉 Interested to see where the plot is going as well. 😊


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  • From Smile317 on June 28, 2021

    I don't know if I missed the chapter 2 posting or you just posted 2 and 3 together but either way. WOW!!  It sure is keeping me hot and bothered.  Having trouble catching my breath. But then I also have a bit of happy tears because they're becoming friends. But also that tiny frisson of dread is making me nervous about Draco's scar on his arm.  Can't wait to see what happens next. You have me on the edge of my seat. Thanks for the great story so far. 😁


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