Reviews for Rite of Passage

BY : Nerys


  • From Oceangirl87 on September 20, 2021

    I'm so fascinated by this. I can't wait for what comes next. 



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  • From saxman66 on September 16, 2021

      Well she now knows that her disguise hasn't worked for a long time and who Julian is.  Although it sounds like she still have a few secrets that are surprising them.  Can't see this ending well for Hermione or anyone else other than Voldemort but have to see what develops.



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  • From ElliePhaux on September 12, 2021

    Hello! I love these first 2 chapters. As a bit of a bratty sub myself, I love the themes of consent, bondage, and power. Also, I love this idea of Hermione giving into her darkness. 

    I hope you continue to have all the inspiration because I can't wait to read more!



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