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By : Jennlee
  • From Bellakuuipo on June 09, 2008
    I love this story. It's one of my favorites. I love the fact that it ends with Ron/Hermione.

    Well done.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 14, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From e8792m on September 26, 2007
    I was really into the story, but, in my opinion, the ending killed it. Oh, you got raped by blackmail, and you didn't tell us, not wanting your parents or friends' loved ones to die... How selfish of you!
    Seriously. Ron and Harry would NOT act like that. They'd go and kill Malfoy.

    And I think Hermione wouldn't be quite so dull, Malfoy's plan was easy to see through. Oh, and I don't think Malfoy is really that evil, but that's far from the worst thing in the story. Still, this was one of the first stories I really felt with. It gave me stomach aches.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on June 28, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - vgss on January 13, 2007
    I normally don't like Draco/Hermione, or many-part stories. But I liked this. Well done :)
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  • From ANON - Enchanted Faery on October 01, 2006
    OMG! this fic was sooo dark! I've never seen Draco portrayed this way in any dm/hg fics! it was disturbing, but I couldn't stop reading it! I felt so horrible for hermione! u did an awesome job at this, but there is on thing I needed to point out...u have LOTS of typos on here and sometimes it took away from the fic. U might want to go over the chapters again. But besides that good fic!
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  • From ANON - sapphire on January 21, 2006
    it was fantastic....Very suspensful :)
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  • From ANON - Danny on January 08, 2006
    That was very good i hope everything turns alright with Hermoine and Ron. When she kissed Snape that was funny. Hope you continue o write.
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  • From ANON - Kitiara Starfire on August 17, 2005
    Fantastic story. Was glad to see Hermione stand up and get a little revenge. Keep up the writing.
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  • From lysa1 on May 08, 2005
    A seriously disturbed Draco on the loose was rather scary in this story. Hermione isn
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  • From ANON - Tom on May 02, 2005
    Wow. Absolutely fantastic. I don't normally have the patience to read a story as long as this all in one go, but this just held me riveted. Well done.
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  • From SueLovesJude on January 13, 2005
    Very good story! At first, I had a little trouble believing Hermione would go along with it; once I let go of that reservation, I really enjoyed the fic. Malfoy was a perfect little sh*t, very canon - but then when it came to 'brass tacks', he wasn't so brave after all. He was perfectly in character! :)

    Overall, the fic had vivid descriptions, good characterizations, and just the right amount of action. The sex scenes were well done, and Malfoy was appropriately brutal in them, even in her nightmares. Nicely done! :)
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  • From on January 10, 2005
    0o0o, that was a fantastic fic! I'm so glad Hermione didn't fall for Draco in the end, like so many of these fics. I thought your characterisation of Ron was great, and I loved your Snape too! What a rotton bastard Draco is though! 0o0o, harsh, but then, he is a Malfoy! You have an great story here, and I thought you kept it intersesting with the chapters being the right length every time. I liked the way you kept the rapes real by showing Hermione's protest and lack of want, and also how afraid she was afterward. It was a really great fic! Keep up with the writting! I can go write some now that I've finally finished reading yours (thats what I kept doing when I came on the computor instead of writing my own! Lol).

    Lov
    x~Beki~x
    x~X~x
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  • From ANON - stacy on December 13, 2004
    Ugh, I wish I can write more to you about your story, but unfortunately, I'm in the middle of studying for my finals. I loved your story though. I wasn't sure when I first started because I had no idea what the pairing would end up as. I was so afraid that you end up with Hermione actually *falling* for such a sickening thing. But you didn't, and you were incredibly smart in the portrayals and I really appreciate what you were trying to do. I look forward to your future endeavors. Have a great night.
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  • From ANON - Air-Force_Brat on October 30, 2004
    That was a great ending.
    You did a great job writing this story..


    Sincerely,
    Air-Force_Brat
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