Under the Cover of Darkness
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Harry Potter › Slash - Male/Male › Harry/Draco
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
2
Views:
3,411
Reviews:
10
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Category:
Harry Potter › Slash - Male/Male › Harry/Draco
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
2
Views:
3,411
Reviews:
10
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
I do not own Harry Potter, nor any of the characters from the books or movies. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
*Author Plea*
Okay, I\'m sorry that this is not a new chapter (I\'m not that good!). Basically, I have a question that needs answering. A very good friend of mine who writes non fanfic slash over on nifty.org told me that I am trying too hard on my descriptions and that I am \"pushing, not letting it flow.\" So um, I guess my question is - what do you think? How can I improve? Do you think I was too descriptive or not descriptive enough?
Thank you to all who reviewed - you make me want to attempt another story! Don\'t worry KK, I\'ll still be there to beta \"war and piece\" for you *grins*
Thank you to all who reviewed - you make me want to attempt another story! Don\'t worry KK, I\'ll still be there to beta \"war and piece\" for you *grins*