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By : Zoe
  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 18, 2004
    Chapter 13... So Nicolas seems to be figuring out a few things now... I am so very curious what will happen when they wake up?!?

    I thought Severus had grown a set, but that has yet to happen:( He did deserve her outburst & she deserves the truth!!! I would like to know the the whole truth too;-)

    I really do like Nicolas' character!!! He seems to be such a caring & understanding soul!!! How much does he know about his father & Hermione, or is it all speculation on his part?

    Looking forward to more, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Stratyllis on February 18, 2004
    That was really great! I love the way you have them thinking in between so little dialoge. Some writers have lots of dramatic dialoge and we never get to know what the charicters are thinking.
    evereverus needs to explain himself quick. He just needs to tell Hermione why he has been such an ass. I can't wait for the next chapter and I am very happy to see an update so soon.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 13, 2004
    Chapters 8 - 12... Well, it's 1:32 a.m. est & I just finished up to chapter 12*
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 12, 2004
    Zoe, It seems that I have been suffering from MAJOR brain bubbles!!! Every time I have seen your story come up I keep thinking that I had read it, but never bothered to check to see if I had left a review... until tonight that is!!! I found that back in October I had read chapters 1-6 & then somenhow not come back to read more... I am very sorry about that!!!

    So far I have re-read chapters 1-6 & am now up to 7. I was going to finish up to chapter 12 before reviewing, but you & chapter 7 deserve a review NOW!!!

    I have to say that now that I know why Sevrus did what he did to Hermione I think he deserves to hurt, A LOT!!! On top of the pain he deserves to have lost all of her respect & had better go WAY ABOVE & BEYOND the call of duty to try to earn it back!!! He really did a bad thing by hurting her the way he did, for the reason he hurt her!!! She trusted him & loved him & he didn't even have the common sense to think that she deserved to be told the why's of his reasoning, shame on him!!! He had a past, not that he expected it to come back to bite him on the ass, but it was there none the less!!! He had NO RIGHT to rip Hermione apart because he couldn't handle the truth!!!

    I think what really pisses me off at him is that he has the balls to think that she shouldn't still be angry at him after what he did to her.... STUPID MAN!!! Don't get me wrong, I want them together, but he better really come through in every way for her & NEVER give her another reason to fear he will hurt her again.... I think a bit of walking on egg shells & thin ice for a while sure wouldn't hurt any!!!

    Sometimes I think I get a little too into a story, but that's only when they are REALLY GOOD ONES & this one is!!! I am off to finish up to ter ter 12, hope I can stay awake long enough!!! If not I WILL finish it tomorrow!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Zoe Elizabeth on February 12, 2004
    :D That's right...I forgot to add in the little passage that Antipodean Opaleyes feast on sheep and would migrate to Australia occasionally...that was how they were responsible for the kangaroo killings in the 70's...I should have credited the source of information.

    My apologies folks! The infoion ion on the Antipodean Opaleye was from Dracopedia and The Goblet of Phoenix Encyclopedia. Thanks Sarah for mentioning it. I will paste this message at the end of the chapter.

    Zoe
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  • From ANON - Sarah on February 11, 2004
    Not bad, I'm enjoying this!

    I hope Sev has a better reason for being mean to Hermione than he just didn't want to tell her was married, though... Maybe Nicholas was it (I guessed, btw, as soon as he started speaking to him familiarly in the classroom... it was a nice twist, although I had an inkling from when you first introduced him.)

    I have to point out though (since I'm Australian) that there are no kangaroos in New Zealand. Theyre ours, dammit! *vbg* Also they're actually *very* numerous, so noone would be too concerned over dragons killing a bunch--in the 70s we were slaughtering them by the truckload ourselves, I think.

    keep up the good work, anyhow.
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  • From ANON - Stratyllis on February 11, 2004
    Yay! I am finally getting it. This story is so wonderful. I can't wait until Hermione finds everything out. That will be an intresting chapter. See ya next update.
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  • From ArachneNonafel on February 09, 2004
    Great fic but I am wondering if you are going to get HG and SS together eventually or not. ;) Anyway, like I said....great fic. I hate writing long reviews though this one certainly deserves more than I've written. Your tale holds many secrets that you will no doubt reveal in your own time. :) I will be looking forward to future chapters. Later.
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  • From ANON - mele on February 07, 2004
    aarrgghhh! i thought it was a new chapter! i guess you were just editing the old one. i have been anxiously awaiting any prose you might deign to let fall on your poor devoted followers... sigh. write soon, please! aloha, mele
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on December 19, 2003
    Ooo! Another wonderful chapter! Everything seems to be rolling right along and I have to say I am intrigued by the owl and that new student! Can't wait for more!

    Hugs,
    Ness
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  • From ANON - April on December 19, 2003
    Well, that was a very interesting chapter. I loved the lesson on Belladonnas. I find myself intrigued with it also. I also find myself drawn more and more into your Nicolas character. I like how he is but I'm also mystified by who he is. (I have an inkling ;p)

    But I won't give that away. I'll just wait for you to confirm it. Will I be seeing Harry and Ron soon. I noticed that they have been missing for quite sometime. Perhaps on vacation?

    Please update soon, everything's starting to get good. ;p


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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on December 19, 2003
    I liked your chapter. Nicolas is a really cool character. I think I have figured out who he is... wink, wink.
    You had Daniel Radcliffe as a Gryffindor student. Cute.
    Keep writing and Happy Holidays!
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  • From ANON - Stratyllis on December 18, 2003
    I really love this story. I liked this chapter. I don'ke tke the fact that Hermione is getting over Severus though. That is bad. Severus better hurry up if he is ever going to get her back. Looking forward to the next update. Thanks for updating.
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  • From ANON - SecretelySeverus on December 17, 2003
    oh! It pains me to leave the story here!!! Can they work it out?! Will Hermione believe him? What will Severus do to get her back?!!?!! And I can't tell you how happy it makes me to hear that you'll be updating TLS soon!!!! I've never been held on such an evil cliffy so long! hehe... well that's probably not true... but it was still painful =oP Great work witht the stories!!! PLEASE keep it up!

    ~Leigh~
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  • From ANON - lizski on December 15, 2003
    Great angst! I really,really, really like this! You've done a great job with it, and I'm looking forward to updates!
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