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Reviews for Zephyr

By : Zoe
  • From ANON - Riz on December 02, 2003
    Okay, this is getting really juicy. I'm anxious to see where you're going with this, because I have a hunch. I can't wait for the next update. Don't kus wus waiting.
    And you're absolutely brilliant!


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  • From ANON - Stratyllis on December 01, 2003
    I really love this story. I think it is my favorite WIP. I too can't imagiow Sow Severus is going to get Hermione back. The only thing I could think of is him writing her a letter to explain everything. I can't wait to see what he does.
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on December 01, 2003
    Awesome new chapter! Between young Mr. Thierry & Miss Bailey there seems to be all kinds of problems for our poor star crossed lovers. Still I can't help wanting to slap Snape for not telling Hermione the truth to begin w/! He should have had more faith in her and he should have trusted love to help them through, but NOOOOO! He had to go and complicate things! MEN!!!! Why do they always have to do things har hard way!? I look forward to the next chapter! Your writing really is fabulous, Zoe! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Stratyllis on November 29, 2003
    I'm so glad we finally found out what was in that letter. Poor Severus and Hermione! I can't wait to see how everything works out. This is a great fic. Keep up the great work!!
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  • From ANON - bellatrix on November 14, 2003
    I love this story! It is exceptionally well written and I have no idea where you are going with it so I find it a very gripping tale. I like surprises! I can't wait for you to update so please don't keep us in too much suspense. Please update soon. Good luck with your writing, although yo really do not seem to need it. Excellent... truly!!! Well done.
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on October 25, 2003
    Awwww! Poor heartbroken Hermione! I just feel so bad for her! Great writing, but it's really tugging at my heart strings! *sniffle* I sure hope something good happens soon! And when do we get to see who Annessa thinks is good for her?! hehe! Sorry I have great hopes for her! *big cheesy grin*
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on October 25, 2003
    I just read chapters 1-6 & I am really taken by this story. I really do love this pairing, but this story is just so sad where they are concerned:( Why did he have to rip her heart out like he did, he loved her, so WHY? Why did he do that to her & WHO is the "she" that is still alive? I will be watching for chapter 7 & hoping to find out the answers to these & a few other questions soon!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From Lizski on October 20, 2003
    You've done a very good job of portraying Severus as a complete bastard, and I like a bastard-y Severus! Very nice!
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on October 20, 2003
    Ugh! What a jerk! I can't say that I blame Mione' for feeling that way about Snape! He may have his reasons, but he broke her heart and in such a cruel way. Poor thing! And then he says such a hurtful thing to her! I feel so sad for her! I am really anxious for the next chapter! I can't wait to see what happens and who the mystery student is!
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  • From Semidazed on October 20, 2003
    This is such a beautifully written story. I'm curious to see where it goes! Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on October 17, 2003
    Oh wow! Another incredibly well writen chapter. I wish I was as gifted as you are with words! *sigh* I am so tickled about Annessa! sounsounds very interesting! Will there be any Hermione/Snape confrontations in the next installment? I can't wait for your next chapter as always!!! I can't wait to see where all of this goes!

    Hugs,
    Ness
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  • From ANON - Rilla on September 24, 2003
    That was justrt-brt-breaking! You cover such depth of emotion. I love this.
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  • From ANON - Cold Comfort on September 24, 2003
    well, now that you've dispensed with the overuse of flowery words, the story is imminently more readable.
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  • From Lizski on September 24, 2003
    This is absolutely fantastic. I really like the take you have on botin cin characters. This is a really fresh approach. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Barrie on September 24, 2003
    The wording is sometimes a little rocky, but the emotions are strong and the characterizations excellent. There is potential here, keep going.
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