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Reviews for The Hepatic Hex

By : shemhamforash
  • From ANON - Pixi on October 12, 2003
    Will have to admit that I just sat here and read the entire story in one sitting. Gods woman, you are cruel at times! I really enjoyed the story. And the ending was very bittersweet. Hope it goes over well as your assignment. You may want to have someone go over the final product to fix typos and any grammatical errors that occured just in case and just so that you get the very best grade. You deserve it. I have to admit I adore snape and granger as a pairing... and draco and hermione as well. Keep up the good work. Hope to read more from you in the future.
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on October 12, 2003
    OH, yes, a most satisfactory ending! : ) ::sighs:: tragically romantic. I thoroughly enjoyed the ride -- frustration included : ) -- and eagerly await any new foray's you make into story land.

    And as to your bribe . . . an extra chapter of Triumph will go up today. I'll try to get one of Mother's as well, but I don't even have that one first drafted yet, so I might not get that one up until the morning.

    You like any pairings other than HG/SS? I write/am writing several, though I tend to stick with the mains.


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - Clair on October 12, 2003
    You made me cry! It was good though. But you made me cry! Albus criedG, tG, that was sad!
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  • From ANON - Rilla on October 12, 2003
    Perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect! That's all I really have to say. Yay! I have closure! Woohoo! (And you know, some days lately, early labor does not seem like such a bad idea! Out, out, damn baby!)
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  • From ANON - Raven on October 12, 2003
    *sniff* *wibble*

    that was a very lovely ending.

    I hope you post what mark you got for this assigment it would be interesting to see.

    well done to you
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  • From ANON - Alia on October 12, 2003
    *sniff* I am so crying right now. That was absolutely beautiful. What a wonderful ending. I am such a sucker for gushy romantic stories. I hope to see more from you some time!

    ~Alia
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  • From ANON - missingthecat on October 12, 2003
    what an interesting take on your story!
    loved the terms you discussed, educational and funny!
    would love to read more from you.


    cheers
    the cat

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  • From ANON - Fish (not signed in) on October 12, 2003
    "Hark! I hear the shower running!" Fish yelled over the horrendous noise the old shower made. She pointed in the direction of the bathroom, Shem's ears pricked up as she listened carefully.

    She heard a sensly sly silky voice singing... the sound was rather arousing, though the lyrics were rather morbid for her liking... considering WHO the owner of the angel's voice was...

    "Love's the funeral of hearts and an ode for cruelty, when angels cry blood on flowers of evil in bloom." The voice enveloped her and she began floating, on a small cloud, towards thehroohroom door where they voy voice emanated from.

    "Have fun, Shem!" Fish yelled after the wonderful writer before buggering off to go find Alan Rickman and worship him in the middle of the street for just being Alan Rickman... publicly embarassing or not.

    *~*~*~*~*

    Can't wait for the Epilogue, Shem! *passes Snape-on-a-silver-platter*

    ciao,
    Fish
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  • From ANON - Alia on October 12, 2003
    *tears* That was so sad. And how could Artemis go for Snape when she perfectly well knows that Hermione is in love with him. Arranged marraige or not, I sure wouldn't be that happy about betraying my friend. Arrgh!

    Post...SOON!!!
    lia lia
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on October 12, 2003
    Your merciless evil is killing me,I`m simply dying of impatience and waiting for this damned epilogue,yet I`m getting the vampire mood too and want to struggle the writer because of her last chapter!LOL It was truly wonderful as usual I admit so I`m convinced that the end would be the same level and probably as surprising as the rest of the story.My opinion hasn`t changed,not at all,I was engrossed and enthralled once more reading the new installment today.Thanks for such an intersting and originally-invented plots and well-written characters.
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  • From ANON - Rilla on October 12, 2003
    Oh come on! You can't have him abandon her now, it's just getting good! That is going to be one hell of an epilogue!
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  • From ANON - tigress on October 12, 2003
    WOW, darlink, you love your cliffhangers...but I love them too. Keeps me comming back for more(that among other things) It is very late and I am very tired and would love to write a long and flowing review...but as I said. Plus, I don't think that a long flowing review is my style or yours. Let's just say it's really great and I am very excited for the finale. Oh yes, also, this is so very inventive. Very, very.
    Much love,
    tigress
    PS I want Severus-Hermione loving. I want it I want it I want it
    I have no life.
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  • From ANON - Daya on October 12, 2003
    You were indeed right, my dear, begging is for lesser mortals than ourselves, and I simply cannot imagine what came over me. I simply do not want to consider the consequences had our dear Sev caught me in such a humiliating position, perhaps destroying my one chance to get him exactly where I want *raises eyebrow* by my own weakness.

    You are indeed the mistress of torture, and I am most impressed by hermione's actions, albeit it, she is a stubborn little thing don't you think? I'm still holding out for a happy ending though, but I can see you plan to torture us to the extreme here...

    Its worth it though, for the image of the Deatheaters being 'studyed' on by the students. Lucius Malfoy in a tickling hex...wonderful!

    Yours Respectfully, still anticipiating your epilogue of Snapey goodness

    Daya
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on October 12, 2003
    okay, ::preparing howler:: "just in case" LOL


    I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the resolution. : )

    OH, and before I forget. A SECOND YEAR?????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG! I died laughing. Lucius would have been beyond livid! Personally I'm tickled pink. ::smirks:: That was definitely a unique torture for the arse. : )~

    That was very original what you had Hermione do. She 'died', but isn't dead. Rather like having your cake and eating it too!


    Kiri
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  • From zillyflutegirl on October 12, 2003
    My dearest darling Shem,
    I hate you...
    Ok, thats not true but what a place to leave a story. This is soo good. So very, very good. I really don't know what else to say...besides UPDATE....NOW!! Ok, thats not fair, update when you're ready, but I will be waiting with bated breath. I remain yours, with...
    much love,
    tigress
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