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Reviews for The Hepatic Hex

By : shemhamforash
  • From ANON - Paprika on September 23, 2003
    First of all I'd like to say your story is amazing! When I first read the summary I was a bit apprehensive about reading a university assignment (because frankly I thought that it would be to technical for me to follow) but after I took the chance I fell in love with your story. It
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on September 23, 2003
    I just finished reading of your fic and have to say I`m truly impressed,this story with all this medical stuff is both original and fabulous,yet I`m very curious if the parts about liver and chemistry so professionally descripted weren`t too difficult for some readers not coming along with this kind of information,however I want to congratulate you on beeing so easy of writing particularly complicated and hard explanations.I`m still admirably amazed that you had an idea to include such a seemingly antyclimaxing plot in quite well-written hot Snapefic.I highly appreciate both the Snape`s story as well as the medical hint(perhaps because of fact I am M.D.).
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  • From ANON - Janice on September 22, 2003
    You wanted some fresh and new reviews, so here it is

    This story is great. One of the best HG/SS stories on this site. Thanks for keepingglueglued to my screen and panting for more.
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  • From ANON - Barb on September 22, 2003
    Have to confess i am reviewing this fic while totally pissed on vodca but what the hell, i am usually sober when i read it and i have to say it is great to read a well written fanfic which holds my interest and does not ramble but is succicinct and interesting. sorry if this reviewe stinks but like i say i am completely pissed up, and like off my head. but it is still a very good story. hope im making sense here but i have my doubts lots of love barb.
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  • From ANON - Guardian on September 13, 2003
    Ah - and to do "ANON" any honor: FOAD - I hope you understand.... there are many readers who love the HG/SS-Concept. There is truly a reason behind any thoughts of them being together - I myself first loathed the thought of a man 20 years older then the woman but - hey - I came to reason and I realized that my husband is 10 years my senior and so what??? Hermione
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  • From ANON - Guardian on September 13, 2003
    Well - it's a little bit hard to read for me - because English is not my native language - but hey - where could I send my english dissertation a the the liver now? I'm sure I could get some title from your great story just by reading it :-)

    To be honest - it is a wonderful story - please keep on - thank you in advance
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  • From ANON - Kim on September 13, 2003
    Wonderfull, Wonderfull, Wonderfull:)
    Excellent handling of the moron btw:) I think people like that read things they know iwll bother them just so they have an excuse to rant and rave.
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  • From ANON - lasair on September 13, 2003
    hi,
    I've only started reading this story today, and i am very glad that it finishes in about a week as it is brilliant and i can't wait to see how it goes. The magic being destroyed by the liver disease is inspired, can't wait to find out what the cure is.

    Also Isn't Snape just SOOO sexy?

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  • From ANON - jeannette on September 12, 2003
    your story was wonderful.it was a change from the stories i have read.i would love to know if your going to write more for it.please e mail me if you do
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on September 12, 2003
    A very complex and intriguing plotline. : ) I'm enjoying reading this quite a bit. I can't even begin to imagine how this would affect wizards as a whole! devastating, I'll bet.

    You mentioned this being something pla plan to turn in as an assignment -- cool way to do it! -- I was wondering if you wanted readers to mention the kind of typos that a spellchecker wouldn't catch? (Not that are many)

    Kiri -- looking forward to more of the story
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  • From ANON - tamargrl on September 12, 2003
    Coolness!
    But, but, but... it's not finished! And I want more!
    I just wanted to express my pleasure at the plot so far and at the good biology. While at times it was a bit heavy on the details, it is well placed and easy to incorporate into the storyline.
    Now get back to work and finish the damn story! :)
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  • From ANON - Alia on September 12, 2003
    This story is absely ely brilliant! I love the science you include in it. I am a bio major myself, although my anatphys class definitely did not go into that much detail about the liver! I can't wait to read more.

    ~Amy
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  • From ANON - Dame Niamh on September 11, 2003


    Dear ShemHamForash:

    Thank you for scinscinating story! I don't know how many readers will follow you through the technical material, but I did (physiology minor quite a number of years ago).

    It's like a detective story: we have the 'body' (the symptoms), now the actual condition must be diagnosed before a cure must be found. Most often in my writing, I'm doing the same thing but in the forensic psychology field.

    I love the relationship between Hermione and Severus; his tenderness is touching if a bit OOC at times. Hermione is, well, herself, and that's great.

    Please continue this great tale!

    Blessed be,
    Dame Niamh
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  • From ANON - Raven on September 11, 2003
    nice start

    might want to fix a few spelling errors before you hand it in.
    I hope your tutor likes being a HP character now. :)

    keep up the good work, look forward to reading more of it.
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