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Reviews for The Hepatic Hex

By : shemhamforash
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 06, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Jessie Deal on June 21, 2005
    amazing. I'm just in the middle of a break from studying the digestive tract for my Anatomy and Physiology test and I decide I need to relax a bit. Your story was the one I had open in the 'to read later' list and it was the first I tried to read. Small world, isn't it? (And we never got such great assigments...)
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  • From ANON - sarah g on January 10, 2004
    oh just beautiful! it's all i can do not to burst into tears (i don't think tears and laptops work well...) congratulations on the fine story.
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  • From ANON - GrrArrg on October 31, 2003
    So, I have just read the whole of this story from beginning to end and am now sitting in my computer room (Spare room actually! but computer room makes it sound like I live in an actual house and not a shoebox!) with tears running down my face, and, I've run out of cigs dammit, due to reading/chain smoking combo.

    That, my love was fantastic, and I swear to you that if you don't write another one soon I will take Sev off of you for good, Yes I can do it!!

    My favourite bits (If you are at all interested!)

    Your cringe inducing description of the effects of the Cruatious curse.
    The idea of a whole wizarding family living in hiding in the muggle world
    The first kiss (I am at moments a hopeless romantic, so shoot me!)
    "Busted"
    Vampire ex wife (God how I love a vampire)
    Very disturbing dream (I got a bit scared, well it is Halloween!)
    Hermiones resolution to do the right thing (That's my girl!)
    Vam wif wife no 2 (See vampire ex wife)
    and of course the beautiful ending which has me sitting at a computer in the house on my own, crying like a baby!!

    Love ya
    Kisses
    GrrArrg

    P.s I'm glad you and your team got a high mark, In my opinion well deserved (not that my opinion means much *lol*)
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on October 30, 2003
    Congratulations for you and your group,BTW I regret that cannot see the show,especially pupets(wide field for imagination,I presume).
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  • From ANON - Rilla on October 30, 2003
    Woohoo! I knew you were brilliant!
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  • From ANON - Daya on October 30, 2003
    *dons festively bright party hat, and opens vodka*

    Well done my dear, a result like that could not fail even to impress our dear Severus!

    Have told you what I think to your ... um... face... screeen... sign in name, and as am chatting to you now, shall conclude this hasty entry,

    *exeunt stage left, shaking her thang..*

    Daya.


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  • From ANON - Fish on October 28, 2003
    OMG!
    That... was... EXCELLENT!
    And very sad - That was such a heartfelt chapter... did you cry when you wrote that?! *hands over box of kleenex*
    *eats tissues* mmmm... good stuff!
    Wow... that brings it all to an end...
    Loved this, loved it loads... as did the wok - mmmm... Alan induced climax, eh? heeheehee!
    Oh well... you and me should go stalk Alan sometime! lol

    ciao,
    Fish
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  • From ANON - titania on October 26, 2003
    Oh by the Gods! I weep and weep and weep. That is the most romantic thing I have ever, ever read! This whole story was fabu! (Sorry it's taken me so long to find you, but I have only recently discovered fanfiction. Pawn to Queen was the first I have ever read.) Thanks again for your reply to the prologue of Travels With Severus, by the way. I can see that I have much to aspire to after reading Hepatic Hex. Wow. You are now on my list of faves.
    Take care of you. I need a Martini. Grey Goose, here I come!

    Hero
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  • From ANON - TiaZ on October 26, 2003
    OMG! You made me cry, actually cry with what Hermione did. The way you wrote it, was so moving. Wow. Wow. Wow. I have to go blow my nose! Can't wait to read the next chapter, which I will once I dry my eyes.

    Titania
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  • From ANON - huntergon on October 17, 2003
    I just love this fic......(and i must admit, i learned lotsa stuff about the bladder).
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on October 13, 2003
    It was the awesome royal end,I was utterly impressed once more and now I simply want to thank you for your splendid writing work with hope you`ll create a new story for my and other`s true pleasure.Many hugs and let us,the readers,see you again as a writer.
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  • From Daya on October 13, 2003
    Beautiful. Thats all I can say. No flip comments, no sarcasm, just an appreciation f fin fine piece of work that is worthy of any praise that is bestowed upon it.

    I'll admit to sobbing helplessly while reading it too. You got their emotions so perfectly, and to allow them to both die with dignity together...

    I am truly in the presence of greatness.

    Daya.
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  • From zillyflutegirl on October 12, 2003
    Well, dearest Shem, I loved it. It was wonderful, and for all my begging for Snape/Hermione lovin', it really didn't fit in to the story. Your instincts were so on. Can't wait for your next story. As always,
    Much (MUCove,ove,
    tigress

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  • From ANON - Theresa on October 12, 2003
    Shem,
    your story is definitely one of the best pieces of fanfiction I have read so far, and, let me assure you, there have been many... The epilogue had me sniffling, it's 4:30, monday morning, and I should have completed my own Uni assignments tonight, but I really got hooked to your story, by the humour, at first. And now I know more about livers than I ever wanted to - I was almost in a fit when I realized I had forgotten what a Golgi apparatus is... *g*
    Keep on writing, T.
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