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By : Lizski
  • From ANON - Arsinoe on September 20, 2003
    This is very well done-interesting, erotic, and well-characterized. I like your Lucius--a wicked man, yes, but wil human needs. He's obviously hideously lonely. Having a pleasant and interesting companion who understand his interests--and is a wonderful lay--could easily trump all the tired old blood prejudices. If they tried being a couple, it would be interesting to see people's reactions. Some would consider her a traitor, others a shameless gold-digger. And what of Draco? I'll be interested in seeing where you go with this.

    And I agree with Hermione. Burning any sort of book is a stupid, evil deed.
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  • From ANON - NightMoth on September 20, 2003
    "....sprehe phe petals for me..." VVVVery erotic! BTW, how do ppl tie their hair with a leather thong? I'm asking coz I've tried it but it keeps slipping off. Maybe there's a secret to it. Could you ask Lucius the next time you see him? Thanks a bunch. Keep *up* the good work!
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  • From ANON - Sam on September 20, 2003
    this is great, update soon
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  • From ANON - Hannah on September 20, 2003
    Ooooh! Yay! This is a great story! Keep up the good work, because I have no patience! *LOL* On a more serious note, this is an awesome story. I like your OOC Lucius too. Don't change him! And having Hermione betrayed by the Ministry was a brilliant way/reason to send her to Lucius' arms. I love it!
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  • From ANON - Persephone on September 20, 2003
    I was expecting the first encounter would be at the pool but the greenhouse, the orchids ... just brillianVeryVery well done!
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  • From ANON - Zephyr on September 19, 2003
    OH MY GOD! That had to be the best written set of lemthatthat i have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please you HAVE to update soon.
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  • From ANON - Mia on September 19, 2003
    Love it! Keep those chapters coming!
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  • From ANON - Lyria on September 19, 2003
    Ooh. Very nice. :)

    I'm typically not one for het fics, but I adore Lucius, and he's one of my faite ite characters in the books, so I read this just out of curiosity.

    I'm glad I did. The greenhouse scene was nice, and very erotic, and well written. I like how you've taken the time to develop the seduction. Granted, his options are limited and she would normally never be to his tastes, but you've overcome that hurdle well.

    I look forward to seeing Lucius bring out Hermione's dark side. Perhaps she'll end up enjoying the enchanted manacles in the dungeons. I certainly hope so. ;)

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Sher on September 19, 2003
    Wow! That was an incredible chapter. I loved the whole setting up of that entire scene in the greenhouse (inclement weather, Lucius telling her about the orchids and getting very descriptive in the process, etc.) I wouldn't have lasted half as long as Hermione did! ;D I can't wait until she becomes even more comfortable with Lucius and allows him to open up that "dark side" of hers! Bring it on!

    Cheers,
    Sher
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  • From ArachneNonafel on September 19, 2003
    This si great and I don't know that much about cross-breeding plants either. I think you are doing a terrific job!! YEAH!! Go you!
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on September 19, 2003
    One word, five syllables - fan-FUCKING-tastic!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - giova on September 19, 2003
    Wow, you must have put up chapter 8 just as I was reviewing chapter 7. Anyway, great chapter! I thought the greenhouse was a nice touch, dungeons are good too, but a bit much for the first time. Maybe later;-) I'm looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Rilla on September 19, 2003
    That was great! I love how you lead up to it by eroticizing their work in the greenhouse.
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  • From ANON - giova on September 19, 2003
    I can't wait for that next chapter! I'm sure it will work out just fine.
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  • From ANON - deedee on September 19, 2003
    Thank god there's going to be smut in the next chapter! Hell, if Hermione doesn't go in the dungeons with Lucius, I'll go:)
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