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By : Nifty225
  • From Pegleg-TinStar on July 30, 2020

    Where should you go with this story?  Nowhere!  It lacks...alot.  I'll admit I prefer my fanfic closer to canon.  That said, I just can't see Harry forcing himself on Ginny under any circumstance.  Forced to live with the Dursleys, who mistreat him; forced to face the darkest wizard of the age, with his life at stake and ill pre-pared to do it; I just can't see Harry forcing anyone to do anything against there free will.  He's been on the wrong end of it throughout his life, he hates it, and I can't see him doing it to anyone else, especially someone he cares for.

    That said, this is another story that could have benefitted from better editing.  Too many typos and other errors to be comfortably readable, whether you liked the plot line or not.

     


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  • From HP2 on November 02, 2008
    Well I think now that Ginny has taken Harry up to her bed i think it is Ginny's turn to take control of Harry. Then after she tries something make it backfire on Ginny and Harry suddenly gets control and Ginny gets punished for what she tries to do to Harry by bondage or something.
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  • From Isake on August 21, 2007
    AHH!!! Ther should be some sort of retribution...he did humiliate her after all...she can put on a "show" for him? He can look, but cant touch...I dunno, hope this helps...update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - # on October 12, 2005
    ginny +strap-on +harry =next chapter
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2005
    They should fuck. Duh.
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  • From ANON - SanityEscapesMe on July 31, 2004
    Sick, story but I love it. Hope you udate soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 22, 2003
    guh-ross!!!!
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  • From joshx42 on September 15, 2003
    Absolutely *bleeping* excellent. Very well done. The way he led her up to the bed with a surprise is phenomenal. Basically, it was as good, if not better, as I'd hoped it would be. I can't wait for the reversal.
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