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Reviews for Dirty deeds

By : Shiv5468

From ANON - nesscafe on December 02, 2003
Love it! Love it! Love it! Your writing is so hillarious! My face always lights up when I see you've updated! BTW! You have to write the Ginny/Lucius story! It would rock! And don't worry about being unfaithful to Sev! As long as you pair Lucius w/ Gin and Mione' w/ Sev all is well!
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From ANON - Rilla on December 02, 2003
As I was reading this chapter I was wondering if you had a Ginny/Lucius story planned. That could be just delicious. And I know this is pathetically sappy, but I'm so glad Hermione is going to stay with Severus.
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From ANON - Arsinoe on December 02, 2003
This is such great fun! Hermione is so wonderfully clever and spirited! Her reaction to the Tosser is so, so, appropriate!
I love the idea about Ginny and Lucius! May we see them at it? Could be thrilling. It would be fun to see Lucius being possessive and mindlessly enamoured all at once. And Ginny finding one man who could satisfy her various needs. Pretty Please!
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From ANON - MlleGigi on December 01, 2003
I just read the latest installment (I love your story, BTW -- veridgeidget Jones-ish!). My goodness...Severus certainly is beginning to rub off on Hermione! No wonder Gryffindors and Slytherins stereotypically avone one another like the plague...in the lexicon of our beloved Potions Master, they could be a truly volatile agent if combined! Gryffindor nerve and righteous indignation combined with Slytherin cunning and talent for subterfuge? Ye gods...look out!!!
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From ANON - Jenny on December 01, 2003
Sweet!

Do I need to keep reviewing, when you already know I adore the story, and your writing generally? ;)
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From ANON - Lizzie on December 01, 2003
Am terrible at remembering to review, so inordinately pleased that am now doing so. Love your work, pleased to hear that Dirty Deeds is complete and being placed up on aff one delicious chapter per day 'til said completion.

Fan girly gushing now done. Time now for you to update all your other wonderful offerings.

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From ANON - SandraM on December 01, 2003
Keep the giggles coming, they're good for the heart.
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From ANON - kate on December 01, 2003
Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery, so I'm told. Hopefully, then, you'll be appropriately and overwhelmingly flattered to know that I plan on using Hermione's paragraph-long invective ("Bastards. Absolute, stinking, shit-licking bastard sons of syphilitic whores. May they be struck down with a pox and have their willies turn green and suppurating and drop off.") against the frighteningly numerous tossers that seem to surround me in my daily life.

I love the tone. A strong Hermione, a strong Severus, a strong sense of irony and a strong desire to snog and/or shag make for an irresistable story. Can't wait to read more!!!
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From ANON - MsPixie on December 01, 2003
Wahahahahaha! ....... Thank youuuuiiiiiiiii .....
*has trouble typing, considering current postion on floor! Laughing histerically, too*
You have one of the best senses of humour I've ever come across. And on my very personal list, this is the funniest fic I've ever read!!
Wonderful! Keep up great work! *hurries off to read some of Shiv's other fics.*
Love&Respect
MP
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From ANON - animegrl on December 01, 2003
w00t, oh yeah another seXellent story added. I can't wait for the next chapter, in your group you said you finished writing it, nice yippy, I eagerly await the nexappyappys
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From ANON - Jenny on December 01, 2003
*grins*

I look forward to the reformation of Pansy!

Post the rest, post the rest!!
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From ANON - AlphaRyoko on November 30, 2003
Oh! Another wonderfully tongue-in-cheek chapter. I love your Hermione to bits -- she's so ... well, SNARKY! Loved the bit about "strong women", loved the bit about having to do the boys' thinking for them, loved the bit about fighting pandas ... and so on and so on and so on.

Superlative, as usual.

/ gibbering fangirl
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From ANON - Shteffi on November 30, 2003
Look, see? A review! Don't not update! Wonderful, wonderul, as usual. Cannot wait for party. More Lucius... yum yum.
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From ANON - Rissa on November 30, 2003
Well you said to review or no more updates, which means I came running to add in my few cents and pay hommage to this great piece. I've been following it for several weeks now and have been thrilled to see such regular updates with outstandingly amusing content. This has been one of the most unique pieces I've read involving Snape and Hermoine, or any type of fanfic for that matter. I've enjoyed every line in this story and can't help but immediately check every day for more, lest I not receive my daily dosages of laughter and lemony inspiration. I can't wait to read the last 10 chapters which will be coming soon (I hope!). Thank you so much for taking the time to write this and give us poor uninspired gals something to look forward to each read. Keep up the great work, on this and the rest of your fics. :)
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From ANON - kate on November 30, 2003
Happy enough tticetice update that was willing to allow lazy husband to sit on couch, watching stupid football match. Distinct advantage of being able to learn a few new techniques (snogging, shagging and interrogating), tempered by having to deal single-handedly with children. Definitely not conducive to enjoying smut factor but may use opportunity to begin teaching tho beo be mistresses. Er, masters. Er, Molly-Hermione-Ginny-types.

Promise of daily updates lifts spirits enough to allow children an extra sweet after meal, allowing me to commit naughty bits to memory for later use.

Thanks awfully. Looking forward to Lucius' party and the reveleation of Potions Master's sneaky side-trip, though I have my theory -- relating largely to Hermione's most recent concern re: status of relationship...
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