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By : Shiv5468
  • From ANON - Estrilda on November 03, 2003
    You know you should really put a warning on most of your chapters that one should not try to drink and read at the same time. I have discovered that I can only do both with practice and then only if I sacrifice breathing - Laughing should really not be so painful, nor should it result in fluids coming back when trying to be consumed. In other words - laughed so hard that I slid beneath the computer table - so glad the kids were asleep and didn't have to explain that Mom is not on drugs.
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  • From ANON - Rilla on November 03, 2003
    Fabulous! Ah, what else can I say? Love this Hermione.
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  • From ANON - Katharina on November 03, 2003
    You are filthy, and evil, and frustrating, and, and, and.... when are you going to update?
    >)
    ~Kate~
    P.S.- Love ya, Shiv!
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  • From ANON - celticwitch on November 03, 2003
    Dammit, Shiv, I spewed Diet Coke on my monitor laughing so hard. I'm not, by nature, a Severus/Hermione fan (even though I read all the Sev/Herm fics), but I'm finding myself hoping and praying that she doesn't screw this up by fooling around!
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  • From ANON - kate on November 03, 2003
    thank you (thank you thank you) master -- may i have another???
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  • From ANON - Lizzie on November 03, 2003
    Heehee! Dunno why i'm laffing! Oh well, excellent chapter as usuWritWrite another quick!
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on November 02, 2003
    Hehe! This fic is so cute! I love the inner bitch stuff! Sounds so probable! Also, I hope we get role playing in the next chapter! I know you aren't going to danglat yat yummy fish and not follow through! RIGHT!!!???!!! ;c)
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  • From ANON - kate on November 02, 2003
    is there anyway you can keep this fic going forever? please? the playfulness, the smut, the thoughts i know i've had (especially about co-workers and poorly behaved children, and the helpful frozen pea suggestion... they're all too good to stop.

    better yet, perhaps you could work on that sex manual for wanton witches. i'd be happy to beta (yes, that was a pathetic attempt to get the chance to see your work before anyone else. sigh...)
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  • From ANON - Rilla on November 02, 2003
    Excellent. Can't wait for the detention chapter! hehe. I want this: "I am a sex goddess, and I don
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  • From ANON - celticwitch on November 02, 2003
    "I am a sex goddess, and I don
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  • From ANON - Seva on November 02, 2003
    ooh i'm looking forward to hermionies detention, lol!
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  • From ANON - LilyMalfoy on October 28, 2003
    This story is so fascinating and hhilarious. Can't wait for the detention scene.
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  • From ANON - Piper S. on October 28, 2003
    Oooh, a spanking! LOL. You're a reader's dream, with all these fast updates. Who needs wrinkle-free clothes anyway? LOL. Okay, off to read the next chapters of Biter Bit.
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  • From ANON - Mz Lupin on October 28, 2003
    Well written from her POV. Loved it and read every word. I usually skim most stories but not that one. Had a good laugh about Ron tho, loved that part. Especially about his ringpiece on fire, hilarious. Poor Hermione having to sleep with Ron longer than she should have. Glad that's all over. That interaction between her and Severus is great and waiting to read more.
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  • From ANON - jen on October 28, 2003
    thanks for the peas clarification
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