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  • From ANON - Estrilda on October 28, 2003
    Cute and a bit naughty. I like it.
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  • From ANON - GeekGoddess on October 27, 2003
    I am really enjoying your story....don't get me wrong....I love Hermione and Lucius stories....in fact when this one started I kind of wanted it to be one.....but now I am enjoying the deepening of the bond between hermione and her puppy named snape, and I don;t want it to end or for her to have an affair.......please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Rilla on October 27, 2003
    Great correspondence! Love the frozen peas!!
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  • From ANON - Seva on October 27, 2003
    I'm intrigued, exactly how is she going to get around to lucius again? not that last time wasn't stunning, i don't want hermione to become a nasty little hell bitch and go cheating on severus, and somehow i cant see him being up for a threesome (not that i'd be adverse to it ;), lol.
    *begins chanting in very immature manner*
    next chapter next chapter next chapter...
    sorry i don't know what came over me!
    ***Seva***
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  • From ANON - Arsinoe on October 26, 2003
    This story is so delightful! It's at once high-spirited, bawdy, and sweet. Further, you've kept Hermione intelligent, which many writers don't. Having her be a bright, energetic, observant sexual adventurer is great fun!
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  • From ANON - LilyMalfoy on October 26, 2003
    Another great chapter. I love this story. I really hope that you stick with your original plot line, but will be happy either way.
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  • From ANON - jen on October 26, 2003
    Could you please expand on the whole frozen peas thing?
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  • From ANON - mighty moose on October 26, 2003
    oh my oh my oh my, i absolutely loved it! it made me chuckle! even though it was written like a diary, with bad grammar and broken sentences, you clearly have talent, and it was very witty! i adored the humour! the sarcasm! it was brilliant! oh will you look at that, every sentence so far finishes with an exclamation mark! why break with tradition?! well, i look forward to an update! if possible, could you email me to let me know when next chapter is up?! thanks! keep up the good work!!!!!
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on October 26, 2003
    Oh, I do love this story! It's so sweet that they are all in love and sometimes soppy is enjoyable! I loved the end! Poor Pansy! Lucky me!!! LOL!
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  • From ANON - Rilla on October 26, 2003
    Fabulous as ever! I love this. The prehensile tongue! That's great.
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  • From ANON - jen on October 17, 2003
    very very very lusty. full of lusty goodness. full of me wanting to be where hermione is. yeah.
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  • From ANON - Arsinoe on October 17, 2003
    Very charming chapter! I loved the bookshelves, too, and I want some! Severus is adorable. I really like your Lucius, and Hermione's observations are very witty. So, she wants it all? Good luck to her.
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  • From ANON - AK on October 16, 2003
    Loving the story, one question though, what is a French TGV. Please give the ignorant american a translation.
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  • From ANON - AlphaRyoko on October 16, 2003
    Oh dear god this is the funniest smut I have EVER read. Your take on Lucius (split-brain one-track mind!) is absolutely hysterical -- and so true I'll never be abl loo look at him the same way again!

    Well done! Bravo!
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  • From ANON - Rilla on October 16, 2003
    Awesome! This just gets better and better!
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