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Reviews for Dirty deeds

By : Shiv5468
  • From ANON - Kero on December 19, 2003
    Absolutely wonder.

    Completely original, yet totally in character on all parties.

    I can't wait for the sequels!
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  • From ANON - Peeves on December 18, 2003
    I should have reviewed LONG ago...yes, yes I should have...didn't. BAD PEEVES!! I hope all is forgiven when I say that this is one of my favorite fics. It was highly entertaining and I am anxiously awaiting your sequels. :)

    ((raspberries and hugs))

    Peeves
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  • From ANON - LeoGryffin on December 18, 2003
    Hi Shiv,

    I regret that I haven't had time to come over and read "Dirty Deeds" until today, but reading that it was finished prompted me to come over.

    It was funny, smutty, and enjoyable. Great job! I really enjoyed the diary-style and the evolution of each of the characters through the fic. Fun stuff!

    Thanks also for your review of "The Muggle", I've been meaning to tell you - everything will make sense by the time it's finished, but I totally understand wishing to wait until it's complete to revisit it. I find it hard to keep up with WIPs also, and "The Muggle" is pretty complex.

    Thanks again for a very enjoyable read!
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  • From yncarn8 on December 18, 2003
    Brilliant story. Loved every word, especially the rude ones.

    Thanks eversomuch for the plug, 'tis much appreciated but you could have spelt my name right. Woah - deja vu!
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  • From ANON - Syrenslure on December 18, 2003
    This was a very amusing story. I liked how Hermione developed her confidence and found herself and Severus. Slytherin-ness as a sexually communicable disease is really funny. I also like how you played out their insecurities while having them negotiate an adult relationship. Lucius was also an amusing counterpart to the story and I look forward to seeing more of him in future adventures. I am also very much looking forward to the continuing saga of this couple.
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  • From ANON - Rilla on December 18, 2003
    Fabulous ending. Looking forward to your marriage challenge response. After all, who wouldn't want to give Severus lots and lots of practice in bed. I love Dumbledore's treatment. It's probably my inner Slytherin, but I've always wanted to see Lucius get his turn to get even with Dumbledore, even if it is just through threatening le coe comments.
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  • From ANON - Jenny on December 18, 2003
    Feel as though I've done nothing but review this story but having now finished it I feel I should say something.

    Thank you! I loved this fic!!!

    Now I'm going to go away and not read it and then come back after Christmas and re-read the whole thing in one fell swoop. Yay!
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  • From ANON - Jenny on December 18, 2003
    It occurs to me to contemplate the line "Dumbledore gets all magisterial at this point, which is easy with the robes and the beard, despite the fact his is a tosser."

    Firstly, that's "he", not "his", but that's not actually what I was going to say.

    I was *going* to remark that being a tosser has never, to the best of my knowledge, been a bar to being either a magistrate or indeed magisterial in general.
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  • From ANON - e on December 18, 2003
    *clapclapclap*

    dug it. very dug it.

    you have earned a nice break, with all the lovely writing.

    ok, now get back to work... it started with a book is promising to be pretty damned good the more i read your writing, and a sequel will be, im sure... delicious.

    keep on keepin on, youre one of the better writers ive seen posting into wiktt in a while *but donll all anybody else i said that* and the fact that you update a lot *dont worry, i dont have a life either, or a talent for writing. so you definately win there* just makes me heartheartheart you more.

    xoxo
    ...me...

    *s'more claps cuz i really liked this fic and hope you know youre a good writer!*
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  • From ANON - Pandora Nervosa on December 17, 2003
    Am sorry to see this end, but looking forward to the sequels. VERY much looking forward to more "It Started with a Book". The opening chapters were marvelous.
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  • From MaddyRiddle on December 17, 2003
    Great ending!
    I'm not that worry about what fic you update next... 'cause I'm reading all your fics in progress. I'll be happy with any update. ;)
    All your work is great... keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Loopy Loony Luna on December 17, 2003
    Good chapter, but I'm sad to see the fic over. Needless to say I'm impatient for the sequel. I thought the image of Hermione bending over the large cauldron was amusing.
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  • From ANON - Skjeve on December 17, 2003
    And the American judge flips up her card... TEN! TEN! SHE GOT A TEN! AND THE CROWD GOES WILD!

    *ahem*
    Beautiful as ever! Although a little more snarkiness in *couetenetention would have been shiver-worthy... ;) Personal preference talking there, I think. I can't wait for the sequel! And I'll watch for the challenge response with bated breath.

    -Can'twaitcan'twaitcanaitCaitCrooked
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on December 17, 2003
    Loved the fic!
    I hope you write the Lucius/Ginny fic in the future, it would be brilliant!
    Great idea to have Snape be the anti-sex god in your forced marriage challenge fic. It would be refreshing for him to be a lousy fuck. Give him LOTS of practice! I'm sure he will get better. (grins)
    Til next time...
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  • From ANON - kate on December 17, 2003
    ae rie risk of sounding and actually being obsequious, GO YOU! I have enjoyed evenstanstallment of "Dirty Deeds" and I've enjoyed several installments repeatedly (ahem).

    the balance of humor, characterization, lemons and your obvious affection for your starring players has made this just as much a joy to read as everything else you've written.

    carry on, great work and thanks for the promise ore ore fun in the near future.

    happy holidays!
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