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  • From ANON - Seraphim on October 28, 2003
    April,

    I've really been enjoying the twists and turns of I, Snape. The exposure of the Potions-hating Potions Master in this chapter is a fascinating challenge to my suspension of disbelief.
    I'm a bit concerned, though, with the burden placed on Miss Granger to direct his life as well as her own. Wasn't she casting about for a direction 'weeks' earlier? And, if 'saving Severus' becomes her new hobby, wouldn't she eventually become dissatisfied with dragging him around behind her? (Incidentally, if you want help writing this last idea - let me know.)
    I really hope that Severus will get his act together and become capable again - for I don't forsee Hermione being able to maintain respect for him as a person on the basis of sex alone. However, prove me wrong in a believable fashion, and you'll REALLY have a sex farce!

    Thanks for writing - looking forward to the next installment!
    Seraphim
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  • From ANON - Jenny on October 28, 2003
    You're mad. This whole story is mad. I'm enjoying it, though. :)
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  • From ANON - MaddyRiddle on October 28, 2003
    Great chapter! Don't know what to say, really... I always comment about the funny parts... Don't take it as if it's something wrong with the rest of the story... It's only that I can relate too much with the depression thing to make comments of that without being too personal. You are portraying the feelings of a very depressed person so well that I'm shocked.
    So going to the funny part before I start rambling... Albus's marrige in Vegas? And he want Severus and Hermione there? (may I say that's not a good place to be for a depressed person and his savior? that could lead to a marrige not so wanted... well, maybe wanted but without thinking about it...). I need to read about it! Please update soon!!
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  • From on October 28, 2003
    hello,
    i do apologize for not making regular reviews, but i read this straight through after seeing some user comments on wiktt. This story is wonderful, I'm really enjoying how you're portraying snape, especially how you're venturing into his prat side. "ear wax mrs granger, earwax," oh that was priceless! and i can very much see a canon snape making the same type of response, stone faced, pausing midcut to his pie, looking you straight in the eye, knowing full well he's being cheeky as hell.
    I look forward to the rest.
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on October 27, 2003
    Wow! That Snape is something else! You want to hate him, but he's so helpless that you just can't! He so needs her to rescue him from himself! Bless his heart! That was so sad where it sad he didn't want his life so she could have it! Oh I wanted to cry! What great writing! Update again! SOON!!! PLEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - Elizabeth Stump on October 27, 2003
    Althea saying "You are the king"... me me bust a gut. I suppose it has to do with a memory of a movie or something where the bored house wife is saying in bored nasal tones as her husband humps her "Oh, God you're good. You are the king."

    Interesting that Snape realizes he wants Hermione enough to drown himself if he can't have her, though he just disparaged Mudbloods, raved about the Dark Lord's original plan to "level the playing field" then let Hermione shag him after she saves him. Interesting how he goes from despising her to not wanting to live without her. I hope you go into more detail into his line of thinking as it seems a bit abrubt. Since I expect a Snape inner mologue next chapter (as you seem to alternate), I hope to know why he has gone from ridicule and loathing her to needing her so quickly.

    I love the fact that you have Hermioake ake off her rose colored glasses and sees Snape for the twit he can be at times. That was different, as usually she falls for him and then sees him as perfectly flawed. I can't blame other fics for doing, I did it with a Challenge I wrote (but I pounded that out ASAP and didn't have time/drive to do as much in depth work as you have done). But for the fact she lusts after him, shags him and then sees him in a less than flattering light was an interest twist. It would be interested in him clinging to her and she feels like he's clinging to her and she wants space. Now THAT would be a twist. Hmm, sounds like challenge material.
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  • From ANON - Bindi on October 27, 2003
    Great!
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  • From ANON - ne[ on October 27, 2003
    Please tell me there is more! Greedy thing that i am....I have to have just a wee bit more. Please??
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  • From Shiv5468 on October 27, 2003
    I did enjoy this chapter. Not for you the easy route of finding themselves to be soulmates after a quick bonk, but a rather more realistic reaction. I dont know why you call it a farce though, surely you mean reality! This is what people's lives are like - not pretty or sct tct to narrative constraints - but silly, disorganised and untidy.
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  • From ANON - Rilla on October 27, 2003
    Oh how much I love this! I love that Snape turns out to be the opposite of everything she thinks he is. And Dumbledore and Snape's mom - my secret fantasy has always been to be married by an Elvis impersonator! And the end of the chapter was so beautiful.
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  • From ANON - PeevesPetpeeves on October 27, 2003
    Hee hee hee, I am quite enjoying your fic. (Although, I did cringe and go EW EW EW when Snape got it on with Mrs. Norris.) I look forward to more of your work, hun. :) Keep writing!

    PeevesPetpeeves
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  • From ANON - giova on October 27, 2003
    Still wonderfull! I can't wait for the rest!
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  • From ANON - lulu on October 27, 2003
    i very much enjoyed this chapter. poor snape is uncharacteristically so bewildered ao heo helpless. and therefore very funny. although i admittedly enjoyed the former chapter, i am a little disappointed that hermine wd take advantage of anyone when they were in different state of consciousness. if the sexes were changed, i am not so sure it wd go over so well.

    nonetheless, i check every day, for an update.
    thank you.

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  • From ANON - Sam on October 26, 2003
    Great fic! In fact, I have admired all your fics. Looking forward to more!
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  • From MaddyRiddle on October 25, 2003
    Another great chapter! Yeah!
    I like Hermione taking control of the situation. Whether it's because she is thinking of her needs or she wants to help him... it's not important... she can't leave a suicidal man thinking alone... she needs to drag him around and make him want to live.

    And I love the way you express his thoughts!

    Keep writing... and update soon!
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