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By : Edelweiss
  • From ANON - JennyLynn on December 06, 2003
    Wow! I always sorta skipped this but i decided to go ahead and read it. And wow! Its really good! I think you have stayed very much in Character..well as much as one could when writing something that couldn't surely happen ;/. Look forward to future updates!

    And...such a shame she cant be with both.
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  • From ANON - PotionsMistressM on December 06, 2003
    Thanks for updating! I really enjoy this story a can can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - brittni on December 06, 2003
    very good. you have to write more, tho. *starts to cry* i weep at the lack of chapters! *gets control of self* okay i should be all right. but, seriously, i want to hear more about severus. hes being sucha good guy and i want more of that. dumpledore walking in n him making the pledge to hermione was a good touch. now at least dumpledore knows and maybe he will tell hermione!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 06, 2003
    I am so glad that you were able to update & hope that all is well for you!!!

    I have missed thiory!ory!!! Chapter 11 was WONDERFUL!!! I really have a thing for a jelous Severus as well as a sad & hurting Remus.... I want them both;-) How will she ever be able to choose between the two men?

    I really do feel bad for the kids & I know that it will take some time for them to adjust. I hope that things will get easier for them soon!!! I also hope that the potion will prove to work for Remus!!! Not a great side affect, but it will be worth it if it cures him!!!

    Hoping that you will be able to update again soon, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Tanya on December 06, 2003
    Oh! I have tein min my eyes! Such a wonderful chapter! I really hope Remus is all right! Severus holding Hermion - and being caught by Albus - what a wonderful way to end that chapter! I am definitely rooting for Severus and Hermione, though my mind could change at any moment! Update soon!
    Tanya~
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  • From MaddyRiddle on November 12, 2003
    Awwww
    another great chapter! I like it!
    Please, please, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on November 11, 2003
    Oh I am so very glad that you didn't abandon this story! I love it! Those poor little angels! I hope Hermione can convince them that Snape isn't a monster and that he didn't kill their parentPoorPoor Severus! He is always the demon. No wonder he is always so snarky and mean. It's his defence against being hurt first! I hope thisry hry has a happy ending!
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  • From ANON - Tanya on November 11, 2003
    Absolutely wonderful chapter! It's ok that it took y whi while to update, I can understand a busy schedule... The part where Hermione met the kids was very well-written! I swear I had tears in my eyes... Update soon!
    Tanya~
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on November 11, 2003
    Chapter 10 is FABULOUS, so much caring, sadness, hope!!! I am hoping that Hermione will be able to help the children understand about what Severus had to do. She seems to be able to touch your heart & I'm hoping that gift will be to her advantage where the children are concerned. Can't wait for Chapter11!!! Deb >^..^<
    P.S., I vote that Hermione gets to have both Severus & Remus, after all, she deserves them both;-)
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  • From ANON - cw on November 11, 2003
    Such a touching scene at the end of the chapter, it was enough to bring tears to my eyes. Will Hermione suggest testing the potion on the kids? Can't wait until the next chaper.
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  • From ANON - MissCrystalix on November 04, 2003
    every day, sometimes twice a day, i check to see if you've updated...but alas :'( :'( :'(
    when are you going to update? i love your story! please write more soon :'(
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  • From ANON - Fervesco on October 31, 2003
    WOW! Can't believe I didn't read this before! Actually in some ways it was probably just as well - I got to read the whole lot at once. Don't know if I could have stood just one chapter and having to wait (am bloody impatient person!) That said you'd better hurry with the next chapter. Love your Sev (very fickle about him so that is quite a compliment) and the dark twists in the plot. Fantastic!
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  • From ANON - Maddy-Riddle on October 27, 2003
    Awww
    Great chapters! I love the story a lot. Please, please, keep writing... and update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Tanya on October 26, 2003
    What a wonderful, plot-thickening chapter! I loved it! I can't wait to find out what happens next with Remus and the kids, Severus and Hermione and their potions research, and with this new foemotemotions with Herm and Sev! Update soon!
    Tanya~
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  • From shemhamforash on October 26, 2003
    Very nicely handled continuation of a dire state of events...I am most pleased...I hope that you shall update again soon...and I look forward to where you are taking us...

    Shemxxx
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