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Reviews for Trial and Error

By : Edelweiss
  • From ANON - nevillus on September 24, 2003
    im really looking forward to more of this. it is very well written and easy to read. it just flows quite nicely. best of all severus isn't OOC. thank you!!! keep the updates comming...btw how soon till the lemony goodnes.
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  • From ANON - Dana-banana on September 23, 2003
    *grins at Gwen'*

    Greay toy to make your debut, girl! I'll keep reading as long as you keep writing. Hermione's letter is good, quite in chaer fer for her. Should be... interesting... to see what develops... :)
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  • From ANON - animegrl on September 22, 2003
    OMG, this story is awesome please please please please keep writing They may not be reviewing but look at the hits you are geg ang
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  • From ANON - ssar on September 22, 2003
    i hope you continue with your story,it sounds interesting
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  • From ANON - June on September 22, 2003
    Very good so far. The story is written nicely, there are few to no grammatical errors, and I actually want to know what happens next. ;)
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  • From ANON - Irol on September 22, 2003
    Sounds intresting .... please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Petra on September 21, 2003
    I love how you sketched Hermione, Severus, and Remus' character. The idea that Remusngs ngs the werewolves, to help fight against
    Voldemort is great. I have really enjoyed your story so far and can't wait for new parts. I like Hermione and Severus together, but with
    Remus it is okay to.

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  • From ANON - ChevyBaby on September 21, 2003
    This looks as though it's going to be a great story. I hope you'll post another chapter soon :) Just one bit of advise - if a new person starts speaking, please start it on a new line. It makes it so much easier to follow :o)
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  • From ANON - maddy on September 21, 2003
    Hi,

    Well I think it's a great story so far. I hope you'll update soon, because I want to
    know what's going to happen between Hermione and Snape and Hermione and
    Lupin. I always prefer Hermione with Snape, but a bit of Lupin loving is quite alright too.

    I hope other people will give you a review too, you desere it.

    Maddy
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  • From ANON - Wendy on September 20, 2003
    It's a great start - I like the way you've used a letter to Harry to "set up" the scene. Looking forward to where you head with this one!!
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