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Reviews for Blackout

By : LadySnape
  • From silentscream on September 14, 2009
    The very last paragraph was totally unnecessary. It's much more interesting to think about how this will affect their interactions in the future.
    It seems like some of the text got a little scrambled when this was uploaded, so it could use a little editing. But the way you write is really great. Your use if language and ability to describe things is top-notch and the concept itself is really sexy.

    [LOL, the captcha phrase was "nudism bodies."]
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on September 05, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on October 12, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From luvhp on August 12, 2007
    Oh hell yeah, you cna't go wrong with those three, nice job! very HOT!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on June 29, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 15, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - skye on December 18, 2006
    oh wow!! you really should do a second chapter to this... from SS/LM point of view???
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  • From ANON - Robin on August 04, 2006
    What is more to say than 'I love dreams!'?
    Most of all when you wrote about them.
    You're a fabulous writer, give us more of that!

    Just one thing: Somehow two words make one sometimes and letters are deleted. Could you have a look at it?
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  • From ANON - Cathy N on December 03, 2003
    As I was reading this it seemed very familiar, then I realised that we had an ex Professor in common! I love the changes it works wellathyathy N ;-)
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  • From ANON - Aphrael on November 20, 2003
    Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant. :D Don't change a thing.
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  • From RickyRoo on October 21, 2003
    Now that was AWESOME!!! How did you know that it was my dream to be the meat in a Death Eater sandwich? He he. A fantasy shared by many women, I'm sure. Very well done, and I'd love to see a sequel. *wink, wink* I am also working on a little Severus/Lucius bedroom fantasy, but I've only got one chapter up so far. Perhaps you'd like to read it. It's called Dangerous Liasions. It'll take you about 5 mins. Hope you enjoy!!! ~ Lara
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  • From ANON - jeannette on October 05, 2003
    ah to be assulted by those two would really be a dream come true.
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  • From ANON - nev on September 24, 2003
    a dream cum true. can i trade places with her
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  • From ANON - Kiki on September 23, 2003
    Nice! I mean, I was a little disappointed to find out that it had been a dream, but hey, who wouldn't like that sandwich! *LOL* Well, anyways, nice work!
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  • From ANON - lacy on September 23, 2003
    wowa.. I wouldn't mind being in that possition lol!
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