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Reviews for FOREVER FANTASY

By : tas
  • From on December 12, 2003
    Hmm... Did I review this?... Well just incase I didn't when I first found it about a month aI amI am now. Only read up to chapter 7, but never fear. I will conitnue, just not tonight. Great fic, seeya ~flamey
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  • From ANON - Caity on December 04, 2003
    I have read many many Hermione and Draco fan fictions. I must say this one is the best that I have red. You done an amazing job writing this and gave it many many things. I would love some sort of sequel to this one.
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  • From ANON - Gem on December 01, 2003
    I greatly enjoyed reading FOREVER FANTASY. The first time I read it I thought there was something about it that kept me interested. tilltill d not know what that something is, and I have now read this story about six times. I think that you should write another story that is along the same lines as FOREVER FANTASY or write a sequel. I enjoy reading what you write. The two things that really captured me were two quotes thafounfound within the story. "And they continued to live acting out their fantasies and keeping their relationship fresh" and "She's the only girl that I have efantfantasized about after I had sex with her." This, unlike so many of the stories that are posted here, is not plotless smut. It has a great story inside of it and it was quite romantic. If your story were a book it would be on the top bestseller list. I thouroughly enjoyed reading your stoy and hope to read more of your writing in the future. I have come across some wonderful Draco/Hermione stories, but FOREVER FANTASY is truly my favorite.
    ~*~Gemini~*~ AKA: ~*~GEM~*~
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  • From ANON - joni on November 29, 2003
    an hour past midnyt... i was gonna read d first chapter and read d rest tomorrow but i couldn't wait til tomorrow to finish... nice pot... awesome.... 1st tym in a long while dat i read one good story.... kip it up... ope u ryt more...
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  • From ANON - SlytherinSweetie on November 03, 2003
    I love your story so much! It was great! The whole modeling thisg was such a great idea since Hermione's always been portrayed as an ugly duckling. Your club scene was pretty awesome too! I love your plot! Way to go! Read mine it's a little shabby but my new one A Dragon's Gift is pretty good according to my friends!
    Amanda
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  • From ANON - Carrie on October 30, 2003
    loved this fic and i really loved your Mate for life fic!
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  • From ANON - The Blue Lady on October 17, 2003
    I really enjoyed your story. I must admit that I liked "The Shoot" chapter and the Shoot 2 chapters the best. You really described Hermione beautifully and then Draco's situation of being in "sexual agony". Too funny! And then the photo shoot together sounded just about as "hot" as their sex scenes. Scary ending but, glad all the scars went away and Hermione was "unscathed" except for the emotional trauma. The sex scenes were really good! Great writing! Hope to see more of your work in the future.

    ~~ The Blue Lady ~~
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  • From ANON - Mya on October 15, 2003
    Beautiful..i was so touched by this story! I WANNA HEAR A SEQUEL! I totally love the whole MODELING thing...really awesome
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  • From ANON - Lessa on October 15, 2003
    I read the whole thing in one sitting and it's a really good and very hot story. You did a good job. I'd praise more but I'm to sleepy to type.

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  • From ANON - magdelena on October 13, 2003
    Just me again. I read in your author notes that already did another Harry Potter fanfic. I couldn't find it posted on this site. Is it on another??? Also, I look forward to your next story. Thanks a bunch.

    Maggie
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  • From ANON - ashlee on October 10, 2003
    Hey there,
    This is a great story. I do hope you write more. If you do just let me know. Only if it's D/HR though. I can't stand the others because I am a big D?HR supporter and any other pairing makes me sick!!! Well this is great and I thit'st's brilliant. The group that I'm in read. Someone recommended it and all of us read and enjoyed it. Write some more and we will all read it!!! It's bloody brilliant I tell you!! Brilliant!!!
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  • From ANON - Threewishes on October 09, 2003
    This is my first time reviewing a story, but I wanted to let you know that I thought it was H-O-T. Wow, I was impressed...
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  • From ANON - Estrilda on October 08, 2003
    Very nice story. Good plot and nice character development. You might want to go through and fix a few grammar glitches. First, look for the proper use of "good" and "well." Hr would say things "went well" and she and Draco "got along well." Well is an adverb and goes with verbs. Good is an adjective and goes with nouns. For example: The boy is good. (describes the noun boy) He plays well. (describes the verb playing). Also, there really isn't a plural form of anyway. Even though "anyways" is commonly used in some parts of the States, I am pretty sure neither Draco nor Hr would use it. Hope this helps and isn't too negative. I really do like your story.
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  • From ANON - magdelena on October 08, 2003
    Fantastic!! This is such an original, yet totally believable story. I love how you developed Draco and Hermione. Also the fact that they were away from the prying eyes of their school chums for shooshoot allowed for the rapid development of their story. I think your ending was quite believable. And I lothe the epilogue. I wouldn't have changed a thing.

    Keep writing. I'll be looking for your stories!!

    Maggie
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  • From ANON - Riddleslilgurl on October 08, 2003
    Oh how Sweet! And Smuty!Great job
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