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Reviews for FOREVER FANTASY

By : tas
  • From ANON - Kiristeen on October 08, 2003
    I quite enjoyed this story. : ) The only thing I can think of right now that could be wd ond on, is the abruptness of the ending. The story hadn't built to the point for me, as a reader, to be ready for the events in the epilogue. It almost felt like you skipped the sequel. IMHO, you'd have been much better off by ending on the previous chapter with a line two added to give more of an ending feel to it. Now, of course, this is a personal opinion. : ) I'm sure there are other readers out there who will disagree with me.

    ::winces:: I hope this comes off to you as it's intended, helpful. I truly did enjoy the story, and look forward to seeing new stories from you.


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - Cherry Lips on September 28, 2003
    Chapter 7 was very kinky! I just love it when Draco
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  • From ANON - Priss on September 26, 2003
    I have just finished your story and I must say I REALLY REALLY liked it was the first story with couple HG/DM but I REALLY enjoed it... I hope you will write something knew... I can`t wait... you are very talented... (sorry my grammer sucks I am still working on it)
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  • From ANON - Jessica on September 26, 2003
    Please write a sequel! This was a really good story!
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  • From ANON - Jules on September 25, 2003
    What a great story. Lingerie models, how original.
    The scenes with Draco & Hermione just sizzled!
    Interesting sub-plot with Harry & Hermione being cousins.
    I look forward to reading more of your work.
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  • From ANON - Cherry Lips on September 24, 2003
    OMG! I think I need a cold shower
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  • From ANON - Kel on September 24, 2003
    Very, VERY nice. I really enjoyed your story. It was well written with some interesting twists and ideas. I hope to read more of your works soon.
    - Kel
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