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Reviews for Sweetest Of All

By : LacyC
  • From ANON - Alcandre on March 30, 2004
    Another wonderfully written story! You make Hermione and Snape such a wonderful couple. Bravo!!! Very nice! And I would love to read more!!!
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on March 27, 2004
    As again...perfect work. I cant wait until the next chapter.

    Red
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  • From ANON - snailexpress on February 25, 2004
    I'm sure it's ben said 10,000 times before, but that was so sweet. I'm such a sucker for a happy ending. :) I really enojyed the way you carried the story through the years to let us see a married couple that had settled into their lives the their children so well. I imagine that Emily will have ended up being quite a handful... :)
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 28, 2004
    Chapter 7... I really like how you are writing these characters!!! Emily sounds more mature than her age, just like her parents!!! I do so love this story & very much look forward to your next update!!! Til chapter 8, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Filodea on January 28, 2004
    What a great story! I love the vignette style. I especially enjoyed the one where Hermione gives birth. I didn't cuss my husband out when I had our son, but I know some women have that reaction. Have you heard Bill Cosby's take on childbirth? Absolutely hilarious! Anyway, I also liked the one about Emily being sorted. I can understand how she might not want to be at school in her parents' shadows, especially if they are not well liked. Putting her in Ravenclaw was definitely a good idea. I'll be waiting for the next chapters.
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  • From ANON - Ventrue66 on January 28, 2004
    I like your story. It's sweet. Like the way you layed it out with just the important events in thier lives.
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on January 28, 2004
    Simply love this chapter. I hope Emily and Kat have a life long friendship. Now, I want to see more of the Snape family adventures.

    LOL

    Red

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  • From ANON - Daxi on December 07, 2003
    Awwwww, how cute! Fluff, fluff, fluff.... love it. :)
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  • From ANON - Kyra Invictus Black on November 23, 2003
    Wow. I absolutely love this. Nice, beautiful, sweet romance and happy endings. Thank you.
    I love the wedding vows, they're beautiful!
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on November 13, 2003
    This is a really nice story about two unlikely characters. I look forward to enjoying the next four chapters as much as I enjoyed reading the first six. I like sappy, thanks for writting.
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  • From ANON - ShagsTheDustmop on November 07, 2003
    Hi Loraine-I like your writing style and use of description, but I do have one little piece of constructive criticism - the story has very little conflict in it. It is the conf and and resolution in a story that generally keeps the audience enthralled; in this story everything seems to be coming to them without a hitch (labor pains not withstanding). Still, as I said you have a lovely style and the story has a lot of potential if you give the two of them something meaty to work out. Not necessarily anything bad in their relationship, but some underlying issue that demands resolution.
    Hope this helps!
    Shags
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  • From MaddyRiddle on November 04, 2003
    Awwww it's so sweet!
    I it. it.
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  • From ANON - Deb>^..^< on November 04, 2003
    I really LOVE this story, it's FABULOUS!!! So much emotion in each well written chapter, well done!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on November 04, 2003
    OMthatthat was funny. I NEVER want to go through that...NEVER...EVER...

    Ugh

    Poor Hermione.

    Good chapter however...LOL

    Red
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on October 29, 2003
    awww...that is just so sweet...a baby...a baby for the two. He seems so stunned like he cant believe it. I love it. Keep it going hon.

    Red

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