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Reviews for Save Me From My Pain

By : queenpoet
  • From ANON - celticwitch on October 30, 2003
    Tanya - good job! I don't know if you should have let the flames change the direction you wanted your tale to go in. As hard as it is to get flamed, and as hard as it is to feel that you're not satisfying your readers, not all stories have a happy ending. You were dealing with a complex character and complex characters do complex things. The ending of the last chapter, when Severus committed suicide, had me crying. The beginning of the epilogue had me almost sobbing (the letter was wonderful). I'm just wondering if succumbing to review pressure and having it be a dream somehow cheapened all the work you did leading up to the sad ending. I'm not sure, I think it would have been better having ended with the letter (not that I want to see Severus dead because I love the guy and all). But all in all, you did a nice job, especially for your first fic. Consider what I said, though. Not every story hasa happy ending and flames should never cause you to change the direction you wish to go in.
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  • From ANON - Flick on October 30, 2003
    Wow. You made me cry. Well done! Im glad u changed it right at the last minute. Yes Yes Yes please do a sequel.
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  • From ANON - shemhamforash on October 30, 2003
    *stands and applauds* Well done for making everyone squirm. I must admit when I read the chapter before the epilogue I thought you had lost your mind. Even though you had described in some measure the pain Sev was feeling because of his previous actions, having him kill himself had come from nowhere. Had you not made the entire scene a dream, I hate to say it, but you would have lost your story line integrity completely. There is an art to causing anguish amongst readers, and had you set the story up more appropriately, then yes, Sev's suicide would have been an acceptable thing. You achieved more by redeming this is in the end. I was most pleased with the finale.

    Please do not think this is a flame...I don't do those..I prefer to not review than flame authors...I am merely giving you the point of view of someone who has enjoyed your work, and someone who does write dark fics full of delightful anguish.

    I look forward to reading anything you have to offer in the future.

    Much respect...

    Shem xxx
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  • From ANON - jen on October 30, 2003
    the chills were from... severus' ghost?
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  • From ANON - Bindi on October 30, 2003
    You murdered my poor darling Severus.......... :( Please update tonight and save him.....sniff...sniff.....
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on October 30, 2003
    Tanya, Still feeling the knot in my stomach, but wanted to leave a note of a more positive nature*
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on October 30, 2003
    NOOOOOOOOOO, WHY????? PLEASE don't make me wait for the epilogue...... he can't be dead!!!!!!!!!! I'm sitting here explaining to my 4 year old why I'm crying:( They NEED each other!!! There are only 2 things that I've ever known to cause a chill like that, 1. The 6th sense 2. The bond of 2 hearts. It reminds me of how a mom can just "know" when something happens to one of her children. Please let me feel better before tomorrow!!!!!!!!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Stratyllis on October 30, 2003
    Your story was great until you killed Severus.
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  • From ANON - Hate you on October 30, 2003
    WHY THE FUCK DID YOU LET SEVERUS KILL HIMSELF YOU ARE A HATEFULL LITTLE BITCH THIS STORY WAS GOOD UNTIL THEN HOPE YOU MAKE IT BACK UP WITH YOUR EPOLIGUE YOU BITCH WHY DONT YOU GO FUCK YOUR SELF BITCH BITCH FUCK YOU I HATE THIS FUCKING STORY NOW IT SUCKS.
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  • From ANON - Flick on October 30, 2003
    I just dont know what to say. But I thought I had better review because I think I have reviewed every chapter so here's another one for you. You deserve it. You've done a great job on this fic and I'll be reading the sequel as well of course :)
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  • From ANON - animegrl on October 29, 2003
    It was kinda short, but it was to the point, I liked it.
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  • From ANON - Thauryaviewen on October 29, 2003
    Wow...this story has to be my fave Harry Potter Fic! I thought you really portayed the situation and everything very clearly. I would give this story 6 stars if possible! I can't s agr agreed with Malfoy going to jail. (He's my fave character in the series.) But it was indeed something would have happened in real life and I can't wait to see the end!
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  • From ANON - Ventrue66 on October 29, 2003
    I liked the use of the pensieve at the trial. I hope to get my first chapter up in a couple of days. I'll let you know when I do. Can't wait for the rest of your story.
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  • From ANON - Tatia on October 29, 2003
    Tanya,

    Great Chapter! Can't wait for the next chapter AND the epilogue! (*Hint Hint*) I know the sequel is gonna be awesome, b/c you are a fantastic writer!

    Tatia(Taco)
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  • From ANON - Rileywolf133 on October 29, 2003
    Great Story! I liked the plot a lot, it was good, and I hope you keep on writing! Gotta love the Sevvy! ^__^ *sexy sizzle from Severus*
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