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Reviews for The Road Home

By : alexial
  • From ANON - ~*~Tasha~*~ on December 22, 2006
    I hope that you decide to continue this one.
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  • From ANON - tara on June 17, 2005
    awesome story!! when i saw Scranton i was like whaaaaaaaaa??? i'm from near there! are you? let's chat!

    thanks! ;-)

    tara
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  • From ANON - Mod on February 04, 2004
    Awwwwe I was so sad upon reaching the end of chapter 5 and finding no chapter 6! what's up with that? JK This is a really coll fic I hope we get to find out soon what her husband did to her and I hope that it comes to blows or something equally interesting when Harry, Ron, Sirus and if Severus wakes up, Find out.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 04, 2004
    I want to like this, I reallay do... but I can't get past "Mommy". English children do not have "Mommies" they have "Mummies". PLEASE change it--it is incredibly off-putting and makes your story OOC from about the third line.
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  • From ANON - Annabel on February 03, 2004
    Your fic is quite interesting...


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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 03, 2004
    Chapter 5... I am so glad that you have updated!!! I am figuring that we will be seeing a different potions substitute SOON, Kettlebourn sounds about useless!!!

    I am glad to see that Cam is awake & told Hermione about what had happened!!! I am hoping that Severus will be waking soon!!!

    Will you be getting into more of Hermione's past soon? I am curious to see why she behaves as she does!!!

    Looking forward to more!!! Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Lizzie on February 03, 2004
    WOW! This is BRILLIANT!!! More more more, ASAP!!!
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  • From ANON - Merrideth on February 03, 2004
    PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I would like to know what happened to Hermione. I have a few ideas about what might have possibly gone on with that Husband of hers, but would like to see what you decide to have him come up with. Who does she confide in? What do they say and do? Does the guy ever show up at Hogwarts? How do Harry and Ron react when they find out?

    Merrideth
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  • From ANON - OzRatbag2 on October 20, 2003
    What an intriguing start to the story. I do like the way Hermione has her friendships in the Muggle world, as well as the reunion and home comingk tok to Hogwarts.

    I'm intrigued by the reactions to her being in proximity to men; it leads to some sinister overtones, though these are of course not laid out as yet.

    The friendship between Cam and Severus is well done. It could be saccharine sweet, but it isn't and it does seem delightfully real.

    I'll be interested to see how the story develops with Severus in a cycle of regret, rememberance and horror.

    This story is very well written and very well put together. I'll be watching for updates as this looks like it could be a new take on an old theme, whilst also being a refreshing way of getting all of the characters to interact.


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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on October 20, 2003
    I've read up to chapter 4 & am glad that I came you your story*
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  • From ANON - z26 on October 02, 2003
    This is a really good story so far. The plot and the characters seem really put together. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - wendy on October 01, 2003
    Wow - this is really a great story. Well-written, and very intriguing... I am not usually up this late reading, but I was hooked. I love the long chapters you use! Please update soon. I am very interested to see what exactly occurred with Hermione's marriage.
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