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Reviews for The Shattering of Souls

By : ladydeathfaerie
  • From ANON - Kenly on February 14, 2004
    poor remie. he's so confused. seems he can't make heads or tails out of that guardian. and the snape/bri thing is grating on him with the harry/izzy thing. poor poor remie. poor bill too. i feel bad for him. he lost a brother, and the woman he blames for it is under the very same roof...
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  • From ANON - Kenly on January 29, 2004
    this chapter worked well. they're both blitzed and both feeling bad. so... it works. the meaness that harry uses on her.. sor sorta think there shoulda been more of it, or TO it... but it works too. so, what about the other characters? Bill and Remus and Tyler... we keep reading about the day-to-days of Snape, Bri, Izzy and Harry. how about a day of one of thhershers too? just a thought. i love this. keep going!
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on January 28, 2004
    Oh my Goddess. That was a powerful chapter. Just thin tha that Harry had that side of him hidden all those years. I enjoy a bit of roughness but...ouch...I do not envy Izzy when she wakes the next day. However...I do like the thought of Harry finally growing up and taking some control in a part of his life. Well done.

    Red

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  • From cherylzv on December 22, 2003
    I've had your story on my "to read when I have time" list for awhile now, and I am so happy that I finally had a chance to take a look at it! I've only gotten through the first couple of chapters so far, but look forward to reading the rest. Great story line so far, and I like the darkness in it (and the rest that I can anticipate coming up). Intelligently written and the pace is good. Thanks for a cool story.

    R.
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  • From ANON - Kenly on December 21, 2003
    So... What's up with Remus? What about that guardian, Tyler? That's not cool of Severus, but I wouldn't expect anything else, I guess. ^.^ This is coming along smashingly, doll. If no one else is reading it, I am.
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  • From ANON - Kenly on December 08, 2003
    Wow... Deep, moving, and tear-jerking. You did a wonderful job on introducing the newest character. She seems like a sweet girl. Remus seems to like her too. I feel bad for Bill and Harry. You're doing a great job. Keep it coming, girlie!
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  • From ANON - Summer on November 10, 2003
    Well done. You have managed to write a very dark fic that looks as thought it may turn into a love story. I am glad to see that in your story the wizarding world is not all happy sing-songie after the fall of Voldemort, but is dark and unpredictable with a fair amount of evil in it still. That is much more realistic (for harry potter land). I cannot wait to read what you have comming up next.
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on November 10, 2003
    Poor Bri. To have a part of her life erased from memory. That has to be tough. And I think Izzy needs to be throttled. Its typical that she would accuse Severus. Ugh...Kick her ass for me will ya?

    Love the story so far, keep them coming.

    Red
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  • From ANON - Kenly on October 30, 2003
    This is, as always, great. It's nice to know it was so easy for him to get her away. It's also nice to know that she's back at Hogwart's where she belongs. I thought that's what had been carved into her. It's nice to know I still have some of my skill. :P
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on October 30, 2003
    ugh...poor Bri. Im glad that Severus got her out of there. The poor thing. Things are going to be tough on her getting well aftert kit kind of abuse. Looking forward to more.

    Red

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  • From ANON - Kenly Sekuri on October 23, 2003
    wow... that was... something, for sure. very good. poor, poor bri. that's just not quite right what has been done to her... what'd they carve into her back? that's what i want to know. incredible darkness. very... deep and evil.
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  • From ANON - jenn on October 20, 2003
    Eeep! What a dark, scary chapter. I loved it! Good idea having her not have any memories. I guess she obliverated them herself so she would not spill her secrets under torture. I love dark stories and this is just great. Look forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on October 20, 2003
    Oh...My...Goddess...

    You DID say this was a dark chapter and you werent just whistling dixie...Holy crap...Poor Bri...I hope she gets rescued...PDQ!!!

    Red

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  • From ANON - jenn on October 16, 2003
    This is so good! I like the fact that Dumbledoor has got more then just the one "twinkling" emotion. You are writing him as he would be if this situation were real.(in Harry Potter land) I am on the edge of my swaitwaiting for more. I just love dark fic's! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on October 16, 2003
    Ugh...Man...I do NOT envy Bri and the things she must be going through. Severus seems cold here but then thats his way. I cant wait to read more.

    Red
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