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By : Fervesco
  • From ANON - Corazon on November 05, 2003
    I have finally read your story and I must
    say you are doing a splended job with it!
    I love how you established a strong
    relationship between Hermione and Severus
    early on, making their breaking hard to
    accept. Now that she is back with Remus
    and old feelings are being stirred up, I am
    feeling very emotional and confused with
    ng wng with her! *blush* Even though I am
    screaming, Severus! Severus! My heart goes
    out to Remus because he loves Hermione but
    it is clear her heart belongs to Severus. I hope
    you update soon.

    Hugs,
    Corazon
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  • From MaddyRiddle on November 05, 2003
    Great chapter! (yeah, I can enjoy a chapter with only Severus too).
    I'm looking forward next chapter... but I'm beginning to wo.. i.. if the wolfie discovers that something is going on between his wife and the Potion Master, he will try to kill Severus :( not good, both guys are possessives and I don't want neither of them dead.

    Ok, now my begging quota:
    Please, please, please make Hermione stay with the wolfie please, please, please.
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  • From ANON - tradilien on November 04, 2003
    Interesting update. Hermione still has feelings, Severus seems to have picked the best time (not) to admit he loves her and where does that leave Remus? Basically Oh Dear... Feel a combination of dread and anticipation as to where you are going to take this. Good luck with the exam.
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  • From ANON - Andrian on November 04, 2003
    Keeping me swaying back and forth, though Sev's snarkiness at Remus pulls me to the lovely wolf at times...yet who couldnt love the dark bastard...ARRRGGHHH!
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  • From ANON - Deb>^..^< on November 04, 2003
    I almost expected her to slap him again, but I think this path is much better*
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  • From ANON - LilyMalfoy on November 04, 2003
    Yet another great chapter. Yes, you should decide soon who she's goin to end up with. But another lemon with Remus is definitely in order no matter the outcome.
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  • From ANON - Rilla on November 04, 2003
    Oh dear. She really did set herself up by asking him to decide for her. At least Severus got a good kiss out of it.
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  • From ANON - Shaz on November 04, 2003
    i dont usually review but i have to say that this story is by far one of the best ones ive read in a long time, when i see it at the top of the list saying it has been updated i cant help but get a slight excitement [yes i know my life is a dead loss] and i want to thatnk you for that, so please keep updating and my life might be a sucess!!!
    lol
    thanx
    shaz
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  • From ANON - shemhamforash on November 04, 2003
    m.she.she did it better..much better..but still not perfect...

    Funny you should mention sending Sev over here for my nursing exams (pity if such should happen I would not be able to do the whole *turn your head and cough* thing whilst grabbing his balls)...had similar conversation with Daya a while agao, where I was explaining that when auscultating the chest of a man with heavy cheast hair, you needed to slightly dampen the hair for better conduction of sound. Anyway, I mentioned that it was so unfair that it is not acceptable to dampen chest hair with tongue...she countered by saying that if that man was Sev, it should be made mandatory to have to lick everypart of his body as part of assessment...I agreed naturally, then we moved on to discuss the benfits of those tight white uniforms with frontal ziiper all the way down...and ease of access if said patient was Potions Master. *sigh*..now if nusring exams wre more like that...I would definitly be studying every hour of the day...

    Like I should be doing now.

    Must admit that I have started ignoring people who use my muggle name far too used to Shem now...have also taken to writing responses to long answer questions as if I were chatting--sarcasm and all...Gollum is most impressed...Not sure about lecturers though.

    Anyway, my critque of this chapter...*about bloody time* ::shut up Gollum::

    Perfect. Sev's inner musings were right on. Very much in canon tha that I put much weight on that kind of shit), even with his obvious affection for Hermione.

    I am not a very moralistic person (see profile) and as such extra-marrital affairs don't bother me (*ahem* as long as they involve Sev being the "other man")...so as far as I am concerned, you can bring on the SS/HG shgging now...but alas, I fear Hermione would disagree..

    So I leave it all up to your far superior judgement (if you should breathe a word of my admission there, I wdenydeny it and take great pleasure in deducting as many house points as I can from Hufflepuff *smirk*, before I take your Sev away as punishment umm....I am sure he would enjoy my type of punishement as well *evil grin*)

    Think I should go now, lest I shove my foot further in my mouth/up my arse...take your pick

    Much love and respect...

    Shem xxx (how much bloody room have I taken up?)
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on November 04, 2003
    man, Poor Hermione has some serious considering to do. Past love vs. Present love...Ugh. I'd hate to be in her shoes. However...Personally...I'd chose Severus.

    Red
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  • From MaddyRiddle on November 02, 2003
    Another great great chapter! (So my reviews are persuading you? good!)
    So, next chapter would be Sev's again... not much of the wolfie there :(

    BTW Congrats! Your story has more that 100 reviews!
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  • From ANON - pix on November 01, 2003
    Please keep hermione and Remus together. I like both pairings of Hr/SS and Hr/RL, but I believe that adultery is wrong. If you've made a commitment to someone you should do your best to stick to io mao matter what.
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  • From ANON - Minerva7 on November 01, 2003
    You are so cruel!
    I really want Hermione and Snape to get back together, but I guess that would hurt Remus and I like him so much
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on November 01, 2003
    Thou Shalt Not Ask One
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  • From ANON - Andrian on November 01, 2003
    hang you indeed. I will hex you from here to oblivian if you hurt the lovely wolf...but then what about the sinfully sexy potions master....Oh heck! Just make it a threesome lol...and forget my rules...(hits self in head bad, ANdrian bad Andrian)
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