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Reviews for Rules Were Made to be Broken

By : Fervesco
  • From ANON - kate on October 28, 2003
    i think i may need blood pressure medication -- your smut is HOT and your written dialogue (internal or external) are priceless. please, please update soon. i can't wait for them to get back together. meanwhile, i'm off to raid my children's supply of chocolate syrup. something tells me my husband will be happy tonight...
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  • From ANON - shemhamforash on October 28, 2003
    Grrrrrrrrr *snarls and tries to bite you through screen* *realises it won't work* *curses long into the mid-morning at the God's for their cruelty* *hits head against wall. Thump..thump..thump* *has epiphany* *finds bottle of vodka, and slams it back* *evil thought crosses mind* *proceeds to smash many vaulable family heirlooms against wall* *feels sated* *returns to review*

    Well. ... I suppose that could have been much much worse...I don't know how..But I guess ouldould...

    Your only hope for redemption is hot make up shagging. For a month. In the not so distant future *cheesy grin*

    Waiting (no I am not tapping my foot in impatience) for the next chapter...

    Much respect *git*

    Shem xxx
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  • From MaddyRiddle on October 28, 2003
    WOW! Great chapter!
    Now I'm feeling very sad... poor Severus...
    But you would start telling the story about Remus now... well I won't be sad for long then... ;)

    No problem with the updates... I know how difficult could be Whispers some days (and I'm only trying to read not upload fics)... if you put a note in your profile there with a link to your profile here (or something like that so we can find your work in here) it would be enough. You know, AFF.net is not good for searching the fics.
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  • From MaddyRiddle on October 28, 2003
    Great story! It's a pity I didn't know before that you continue writing the story here... I started reading it at Whispers and there you only have 2 chapters up... Well at least I have the oportunity to read 6 new chapters all at once.
    Maybe you can put a note there... maybe I'm not the only one not knowing you updated here.

    I love the story... and the challenge has very interesting rules... I'm looking forward to the Remus part... but you can make the Severus part as long as you wish... I love them both ;)
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  • From ANON - lizski on October 27, 2003
    Very nice! It's too bad that you are going to have to split the two of them up, though!
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  • From ANON - jen on October 27, 2003
    I still don't see what the problem with hooch is...
    I mean:
    a) her eyes are fantastic,
    b) she's totally in shape because of what her job is, and
    c) that goddamned whistle
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  • From ANON - Seva on October 27, 2003
    Awww you can't break them up, it's going to be horrible i can tell!
    ast ast as freaked as you by the thought of hooch, hermione and sev in a threesome..eek! (hooch has always struck me as more of a lesbian type but perhaps thats just my own experience of pe teachers..teehee)
    anyhow, here comes the lovely praiseful part..i can honestly say that your characterization is spot on, just how i imagine them to be :) severus, whilst still having nice angsty touches about being a greasy git, isn't one of those really annoying ones who talks of nothing else. so, yay! go you!
    haven't posted my own fic on here yet, but look out for it when it appears (maybe)
    i await the next chapter! (and hermione/remus)
    ***Seva***
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on October 27, 2003
    This was HOT, HOT, HOT!!! Next time they might want to add a few strawberries & whipped cream into the fun;-) The best part of getting mad is the making up!!! Waiting to see what you have in store for us in the next chapter!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - LilyMalfoy on October 27, 2003
    Quite a good chapter... damn it, you got me craving chocolate... thank goodness I had some lying around... scurries off to eat chocolate and work on her own updates.
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  • From ANON - shemhamforash on October 27, 2003
    *runs back to computer to review after needing urgent change of knickers*..oh..oh..that was just soooo...soooo..very.very...very good...I am soooo grateful you tricked me like that...can I be the president of your fan club?

    Please...I can beg as much as you need if it prompts you to post that quickly again...really I can/...Or do you require more tangible oferrings?> Tell me *on bended knee* You have got me down know...I thought I would never stoop this low..BUT I NEATISATISFACTION!!!!!

    Please

    Please

    Loved it as usual...

    Shem xxx

    First again perhaps?
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  • From ANON - Gwennavierre on October 26, 2003
    Damn. Now more chapters to read. I couldn't bother with reviewing every one. I was too anxious to read the next one. :) Now I am sitting on the edge of my seat and screaming at the computer (not really, but I want to). More! Now! Hurry! I promise I will NEVER get behind again!!!!!

    ::sits and waits:::

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    dag nammit! What happens!???

    Update now! :)

    Hugs,

    Gwen
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  • From ANON - jen on October 26, 2003
    Yes I do... but maybe not in your story ;)

    But I like how this turned out!
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  • From FaerieOfMischief on October 26, 2003
    This is great hun, I love it :) I canwaitwait for more!
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  • From ANON - Rilla on October 26, 2003
    Oh no! Great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Helena on October 26, 2003
    Oh please Fervesco, tell me that you are not thinking in putting the tree of them on a treesome!!! ( I don't want to be rude Jen!!)
    With so many people, Hooch!!!!!!?? Good Lord it's too..................weird just to think about it!!!
    Anyway, I'm loving it and I'm very excited to know what our Beloved Snape will do next!!!
    Please more, more, more, more, more, more, more....... I can't live without stories like this!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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