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Reviews for Fate\'s Pawns

By : SnapesPetPixie
  • From shemhamforash on October 12, 2003
    You have me so very intrigued...can't wait to see what exactly is going on...

    Shem
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  • From ANON - shemhamforash on October 11, 2003
    This storyline is captivating...you are doing a magnificent job...eager for more

    Shem xxx
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  • From ANON - amethsyt on October 11, 2003
    Very good story so far. One minor error though. Hagrid is older than Snape. According the canon and JKR interviews, Hagrid should be in his mid sixties while snape is in the mid to late thirties.
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  • From ANON - Rilla on October 11, 2003
    Tease! I like the smooth transitions between their thoughts. It's nice to see what is going on in both heads and you convey that well.
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  • From ANON - shemhamforash on October 11, 2003
    AAhhhh. your getting very good at silent sarcastic prose my sweet...love inner musings of both Sev and Hermione and as a side note...serves them both bloody right...

    loving it wanting more...

    Shem xxx
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  • From ANON - Beatrice on October 10, 2003
    You really made me laugh. A very interesting beginning and not too obvious (even though I have to wonder at Hermiones clothing habits). Keep the chapters coming!
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  • From ANON - Yawning (not logged in) on October 10, 2003
    Snapes such a snarky bastard when he's trying to resist her. And it doesn't seem like Hermione minds. Great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Deb>^..^< on October 10, 2003
    I really enjoy reading a story that shows just how much these 2 are made for each other, how they push each other to be more!!! I am LOVING the tension between Snape and Hermione!!! I think you have a great start here & look forward to what is yet to come..... hoping you will update soon!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - shemhamforash on October 10, 2003
    Sooo love an Hermione that can leave Sevvie speechless from something other than her claim to erotic virtue...Like the use of her intellect outdoing him...He may be briiliant, he may be a brilliant male (would be an oxymoron except for the fact that Sev is said male) but he is still only a male.....Let Hermione give it to him good, in all aspects....

    Wanting more soon

    Shemxxx
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  • From Yawn on October 08, 2003
    Bravo. Very nice. Dumbeledore always kills me and makes me laugh so I know Snape and Hermione don't stand a chance. Please ue soe soon. ^_~
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  • From Semidazed on October 08, 2003
    Hee hee! I like this a lot. I must agree with the above... that was one hell of an accident. S's 's all like, "Did I wash my hands?" ROFLMAO! Keep it up. I don't think you need any advice. Just keep writing!
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  • From shemhamforash on October 08, 2003
    AS I am currently ROTFLMAO, all I can bring myself to write is WHAT IS IT EXACTLY YOU THINK YOU NEED ADVICE ON????!!!!!

    This is an absolutely brilliant start, especially as it is your first venture into authordom....*Stands and applauds*

    OK maybe I do have one peice of advice, GET BACK TO COMPUTER NOW AND WRITE MORE *Snarls and tries to bite you through the computer screen*

    wantmorewantmorewantmorewantmore

    Shemhamforash



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  • From ANON - andrian on October 08, 2003
    HEEHEHEHEHEHEEHE...talk about one heck of an 'accident'
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  • From ANON - Rilla on October 07, 2003
    Looking forward to seeing where this is going!
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