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Reviews for Hogwarts Apprentices I--Gentry Green

By : LisaRoquin
  • From ANON - lee marker on January 10, 2004
    I like it. Can't what for more.
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  • From ANON - Jenna on January 10, 2004
    The last few chapters have been great. I can't wait for the next chapter. I am wondering how you are going to have Aisling acting with the 3 sons of her dead/damaged friends. I hope that Aisling and Severus have at least 1 indepth conversation while you have her at Hogwarts. Hopefully their talking to each other will reveal a little more about Blaise, Draco, Harry, and Nevilles' mothers past.
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  • From ANON - GEmory on January 09, 2004
    I think I'm feeling a little bit sorry for Ron. First he's leftind ind by Harry in the full apprentice program because his family is poor, and now he'll be left behind by Hermione in the modified apprentice program because he's not smart. Of course, if he behaves like a jealous, immature git about it all; I'll stop feeling sorry for him again. :)
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  • From ANON - hpz26 on January 09, 2004
    This is a very very well written story! I LOVE it. I ca wai wait to see where you take it!

    Thanks for writing!
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  • From ANON - Leean on January 09, 2004
    this is such a wonderful story, I love it. Hope you update soon and could you send me a mail when you do?


    And please don't make SF and HP a couple, I don't thing they have the time for any fluff.

    Oh and could Ron and Granger still be mad at Harry, Harry being only with the 'group', and everybody scared of Harry and the 'group'? Please
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  • From ANON - Sky on January 09, 2004
    I really like this fic. Please more and longer.
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  • From ANON - tamargrl on January 09, 2004
    I continue to be thoroughly impressed by this story. It's almost more detailed and convoluted than the HP books themselves.
    Keep up the good work! (cuz I, for one, just can't get enough.)
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on January 09, 2004
    Harry and Seamus sharing a room... hmm... :) I see Snape is back to being a git.
    I can't wait to see how this little war between Dumbledore and Fudge plays out. I
    think Harry's getting quite angry with Dumbledore. This is a great fic. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Petunia on January 09, 2004
    Read the four latest - no wonder if you have problems handling the story, there is so much happening! And everyone seems to be awfully chatty. ;)

    I definitely didn't see that Grindewald-part coming...! But he isnin Hin Harry's line, is he? ...Why isn't Tonks the Heir? Is it because her father is born out of wedlock? Bastards don't count? Or is it because Lily was a witch and William is a squib?

    Oh, and I noticed a small discrepancy: in ch 20 Rose's (Dursley) second name is Annabelle, in ch 23 it's Lily...

    Were the "blank" pages in the diary about Lily being the Heir of Slytherin?

    How much time has there actually gone since the apprentices arrived?? Around 10 days? Two weeks? They *have* been busy...

    =D
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  • From ANON - Jen on January 09, 2004
    VERY Interesting. I really liked the lineage book. Great story as always. Good to see the way the romances are progressing. Glad you are bringing Hermione in more too. Great work on Dumbledore shooting down Fudge too!

    Thanks for the update.

    Jen :)
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  • From ANON - mick on January 09, 2004
    what happened to harry uncle
    love to story
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  • From ANON - CheetahsSpot on January 07, 2004
    Now I must add myself the the evils of more please more! Well, you did warn me ahead of time. This story is quite intriguing. Please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - lee marker on January 06, 2004
    I love this fanfic!!!!!!!!!! It is the best that i have read. Keep it up.

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  • From ANON - Hexia on January 06, 2004
    This is great!!! I have been away for the holidays and thus without online access, and when I came back there was loads of new chappies waiting for me!!!!!!!! AND I have been enjoying them I tell you! I just looove this story and the way you build the plot!!!! Though I kind of felt it like you left me with a cliffhanger ending chap. 22 like that!!!!! Do write more soon
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on January 03, 2004
    Oooo! ::claps with joy:: So very glad to see two chaps of this up since the last time i ran across it. Great chapters too.

    Severus is gonna have apoplexy when he figures out Harry has been the one in charge. : )~

    The common room scene where Harry had the vision, great job there. The interactions between the aprentices is very believable. I loved everyone 'ganging' up on Harry to get him to go to bed.

    And I have to agree with Harry's diary frustration. lololol

    Keep up the good work,
    I look forward to your next posting,
    Kiri
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