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Reviews for Hogwarts Apprentices I--Gentry Green

By : LisaRoquin
  • From ANON - Sky on January 02, 2004
    Yeah! More chapters!
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  • From on January 02, 2004
    Thanks for the 2 chapters, I'm so happy
    So we're finding out more and more about the
    'old' days. Ok now I need more to appease my
    appetite, I can't wait for them to do the books
    and for Aisling to come visit them. ;)
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  • From ANON - Arwen Rayne on January 02, 2004
    Wow! Two chapters- now that was fun to read. Always like that extra bit of detail and plot building that is all too conspicuious because of the lack of in other stories.
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  • From ANON - GEmory on January 02, 2004
    Loved the scene between Severus and Remus. Funny to see Remus acting Mother Hen, especially after the last chapter where Seamus was doing that with Harry. You've really created a complex story within the Rowling's universe. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Si on December 27, 2003
    Wow, this series is really great - it's different, but its got a great stand and it's nice to see Harry breaking out of the old crowd. I'd really like to see Seamus and Harry get together, they would be so very cute togethed itd it would probably annoy his "old friends" - or if not maybe Blaise with SeamI liI like Blaise - bit of a mystery.. but whatever you're the writer! It's really great, thanks!
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  • From ANON - Merrideth on December 25, 2003
    PLEASE!!!! PLEASE!!!! UPDATE SOON. ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!! EAGERLY WAITING FOR MORE


    VERY INTERESTED IN WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. EMAIL MEN YEN YOU UPDATE PLEASE!!!

    MERRIDETH
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  • From ANON - Arwen Rayne on December 19, 2003
    Wow! Another deep chapter. And if it does not mess up your story line too badly my daughter (16 yr old) requests that you have the three little Parkinson girls try to run away and get lost in the Forbidden Forest where they get to be rescued by a unicorn and taken back to Hagrid. [It really bothers her that he is such a frustrated mother without any children.]
    We would also like to see Arthur get fired from the Ministry and then have Harry appoint him as his Overseer at Regis Isle. Or, maybe as an aide there at Hogwarts?
    We also appreciated the anxiety Hermoine is now faced with.
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on December 19, 2003
    And the intrigue grows deeper still. : ) We now get to see Dumbledore in his element. He may have been Gryffindor back when he was in school, but I'd bet my bottom dollar that he'd be equally -- if not more -- suited to slytherin these days. LOLOL
    Kir
    Kiri -- eagerly awaiting each new post
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  • From ANON - GEmory on December 19, 2003
    When you first started this story, I read the first two chapters and decided it wasn't for me. Tonight I decided to give it another try, and I'm very glad I did. This is absolutely fantastic! The political machinations and the wizarding customs you're describing are very intriguing, and the development of relationships amongst the apprentices is very realistic. I also like the apprentice idea with their wide range oudieudies, and now the new training program for future teachers.
    I'm glad Hermione is coming around and realizing what Harry has been going through, and I think its very true to the books for Ron to be acting like a git. I especially like your use of Neville, Luna, and the other apprentices. They all usually get short shrift in the books, so its great to read a story that develops them into real people, not one-note characters. I hope that somewhere along the line Fudge and Percy will be "getting theirs." Both characters irritate me to death, and your story really highlights their short-sightedness which is so typical of many politicians.
    I see this is titled "I" and you are already up to 20 chapters, so I assume you intend to write this plot for for a long time to come. I hope so, because this is one of the most intriguing Harry Potter stories that I've ever read!
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  • From ANON - amy on December 18, 2003
    I just found this and I really love it. The twist and turns are brilliant and Harthe the heir to slytherin I love it!! I cant wait for the rest of the story
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  • From ANON - Shawn Pickett on December 18, 2003
    Great chapter, Fudge maybe having his bit of petty vindictivness, but he's going down like the little bitch he is. I found it greatly amusing about Hermione having her realization when Dumbledore pulled some of his games on her like he had on Harry, now if she could just bring the Weasley's around. I was hoping that you weren't planning on having this be Harry slash, but, like I said earlier, this story is good enough that I'll continue reading it even wht dot does go that way. Thank you for an outstanding read.
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  • From ANON - Rolie on December 18, 2003
    Hi I liked this chapter! It was great hmm if later can Draco and Pansy get out of the contract? What about Seamus and the other characters I think you should focus on them too! It will be great if Harry doesn't bother with his best friends anymore .
    I would also like to read more about Severus and Remus please in the story they arnt really that important to me. Your a great
    writer this story is quite orginal. I hope you keep updating like this also.
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  • From on December 18, 2003
    I loving this more and more,
    but where have Hermoine's intense anger
    with the whole Apprentice thing gone. It just seemed
    to coem out of know where, the next track kinda thingy
    anyway other than that I can't wait for the update. :)
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  • From ANON - SandraM on December 18, 2003
    Good. It's about time Hermione got a taste of what Harry's had to deal with all this time. Maybe she won't think that Albus knows what's best anymore

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  • From ANON - Sati on December 18, 2003
    Hi,
    You had been posting updates every Friday. I'm really disappointed that you didn't get one up last Friday. I hope you have one up tomorrow! Wonder if Harry will pick Tonks for his wife. (just a thought I had as I was rereading the story again)

    YOu have done an incredible amount of work with the wizarding traditions. I look forward to more explanations and info!


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