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Reviews for Hogwarts Apprentices I--Gentry Green

By : LisaRoquin
  • From ANON - WriterLady1031 on December 17, 2003
    Absolutely FABULOUS story! I loved it all and was totally intrigued by the Lineage tattoo-- it would be really interesting to see what it looks like in person if it was possible. I just want to commend you-- the story was a good read from beginning to the last updated chapter. I was kind of sad when I got to the last line! Hopefully, you'll keep writing and updating this great story-- I'd certaintly like to know what happens in the upcoming chapters. You know, get all my questions answered: what's going on with Shaklebolt?; what was Ron really screaming about when he heard Zabini's lineage?; Where's Ron anyway?!; What's Mrs. Weaseley's real problem with the Apprenticeship? I've got so many questions as you can see! Please, continue with the story!

    Ciao^_^
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  • From ANON - LinkinParkMonkey on December 15, 2003
    This is really good. I'm craving an update here! I love the way your developing the characters but please don't make him lose Ron and Hermione forever! -.- They are so... arg! I can't even say it. Keep up the good work and update.... please?
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  • From on December 14, 2003
    Omg! This has to be one of the best things I've ever
    read! It's is just tooooo awesome! I love how Hars tas taking
    command but still being like why the f*ck am I doing this
    I love the interaction b/w everyone, they seem natural
    especially after everything that's happened. The Howlers from
    Seamus' mom was too funny....lubrications...I amlost fell over

    I can honestly say this is one story that I'm dying for an update!
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  • From ANON - Sharee on December 14, 2003
    hi your story is absolutly fab. i have never read one like it. where do you get your ideas? do you have a mailing list to let people know when you update? if you do could you add me. i cant wait until you update please hurry up.
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  • From ANON - LunarDream on December 13, 2003
    I love this story!

    I cannot wait to read the next part.
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  • From ANON - Lores on December 08, 2003
    Wow, This has been one of the most awesome fics. I couldn't stop reading it! Hope to see more soon, and I just wish that someday Harry would hex Ron and Hermoine but good. They both need to grow up!
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  • From ANON - PeachDancer82 on December 08, 2003
    Well done again. Keep it up.
    ciao
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  • From ANON - becca on December 07, 2003
    WOW! That is one of the best fics I've EVER read (and I've read quite a few). Fabulous creation. Well written. Absolutely amazing. You totally rock. Thank you for posting this, and expect ugly messages if you don't continue writing it. :) Really, truly, thanks for feeding my addiction.
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on December 07, 2003
    Harry's in bed with a naked Seamus? Hmm... Maybe they could have some fun
    and then Draco nmight get jealous or something...
    Poor Harry. He's so stressed. He needs a bit of happiness.
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  • From ANON - Gisela on December 07, 2003
    Great fanfiction. Everyone had such good potrayal and the interactions between all the characters are beleivable and stays true to the original Harry Potter. Really wondering now whats gonna happen. Hope you continue and finish the story. It's definitely something worth notice because a) The writing is definitely not amateurish (yeah yeah not a word). The writer must have had lots of practice and developement when it comes to creative writing. b) Everyone is pretty much in character. Love Snape's interaction with Harry Potter and Draco, both so different and showing contrasting sides of him. c) I'm a romantic at heart and can't help but wonder who gets with who. This fanfic is so open to any couple. though...can't help but wonder about Draco and Harry...eh...whatever...I know know they're too over done and you may not like em...Oh anyway the story was overall well written and managed to keep the reader interested even though it wasn't action filled because it was always interesting sometimes in suspence and sometimes in humor in regards to the interactions between all the characters. All in all I truly hope you continue with this story and if not well lookign foward to reading your other works. ^-^
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  • From ANON - Brenna on December 06, 2003
    What an excellent fic! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. Do you have some form of notification (with nk) nk) or mailing list I can sign up for? I truely do no not want to lose track of this most excellent fic. I can pratically see Harry tiredly calling accross the common room to Luna if she would marry him, he in her dreamy way saying yes and then let Blaise and Draco er oer out the contract. Draco representing Luna of course. He hates Harry ;)
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  • From ANON - Sky on December 06, 2003
    Whooo! Whoooo! More chapters! And the plot thickens.
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  • From ANON - Shawn Pickett on December 06, 2003
    Interesting chapter, the apprentices really need to get on with blasting Fudge and Pein tin the Daily Prophet, it's obvious thoso ido idiots are going to keep escalating this until they figure out a way to disband the lot. It's funny, in their desperate bid to keep power, they are going to loose it because they picked the wrong people to mess with. I really want to see them stomp all over Fudge and Percy, maybe Molly is she doesn't pull here head out of her backside too. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - CC on December 06, 2003
    This is one of the most original fics I have ever had the pleasure to readank ank you so much for sharing your wonderful gift with us! I wish you could find an artist to show the Apprentices with their tattoos! Love the fic and I hope you are updating soon. Oh I am also recommending this to the rest of my friends..It is a must read!
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  • From ANON - Petunia on December 06, 2003
    I didn't expect Harry and Seamus to end up in the same bed this soon. *snigger* And I don't really even want to comment on Fudge and Percy, they have proven their idiocy and pettyness so many times. I guess we'll get to the Books soon? I'm on the edge of my seat, waitng for the next! The more you write, the more I want, the ungrateful little thing that I am.
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