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Reviews for Hogwarts Apprentices I--Gentry Green

By : LisaRoquin
  • From ANON - Kiristeen on December 06, 2003
    This story so has the same feel as JK's books. I'm thoroughly getting into it. The fudge/percy interference was a stroke of genius on your part. I think this chapter was one of the best so far. It really gave off the feeling of Harry's utter weariness with everything. I look forward to seeing more, as each chapter seems to improve on the last.



    Kiri
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  • From ANON - Aurora on December 06, 2003
    Please tell me that Percy and Minister Fudge are going to get what is coming to them. Please tell me that because of these "mandates", that it truely backfires on Fudge and Percy to the point that they will be kicked out of the Ministry.

    I hope that all this trouble means, at least, that The Ministry and Malfoy's Father-in-law can't get their hands on the Malfory fortune in anyway due to the Lineage that has been revealed. Worse, it's found out that the Ministry and Fudge have been illegially dipping into those fortunes that have been frozen or unclaimed because no heirs have been found as yet. Maybe having irrefutable proof is going to cause some serious financial kinks?

    Gringotts is neutral. But they follow their own banking laws very rigirously. So if it were to to to their ation,ion, wouldn't part of their duty be to make sure that their "funds" is given into the heir's hands? INcluding where all the money has been used for and by up to that moment? :::chuckle::: NOthing is worse than leaving a paper trail concerning money.
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  • From ANON - Kat Denton on December 06, 2003
    Yippee, another chapter! I REALLY needed a pick me up after the day I had at work today. Thanks! I laughed about Seamus' mom sending him sex guides and lube .

    I always look for GGreen in the updates and it makes my day when it pops up. Kat
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  • From ANON - Waywren Truesong on December 05, 2003
    Hogwarts luvs Harry! Wai! And of course Harry loves Hogwarts when he's not busy holding the world together with teeth and toenails. Poor dear. They really must find some quiet time to 'chat'.

    ...all of them doing the Potion AT ONCE!? .........who's up for a Strangle-Fudge party?

    *cackles* Harry sighed.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 05, 2003
    great story
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  • From ANON - Arwen Rayne on December 05, 2003
    Yeah! Another excellent chapter. I still think you should have put Harry in Blaise's bed though.... You make him sound so sexy!!!
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  • From ANON - Momma-dar on December 05, 2003
    I absolutely love this story and was thrilled to see that you had updated. This would have to be one of the most original and interesting stories that I have had the privilege to read. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next and I really hope tyou you can update soon. Keep up the brilliant work and I will be waiting for the next chapter patiently. I can't wait to see what Fudge's reaction is going to be to the groups lineage tattoos. It is going to be priceless. Keep up the writing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 04, 2003
    Please Add More And SOON!!! ALOT MORE!! I love this story
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 04, 2003
    Why do you have two of the few minorities in Harry Potter fiction behaving so badly?
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  • From ANON - Petunia on December 04, 2003
    Which fallout began? *blinks* Not important I suppose; will be cleared in later chapters.

    You had a good explanation for Molly's behaviour in your group, so I won't gawk at it too much. Did she get that attitude from her mother after the divorse? I can well imagine Petrus Parkinson to cause such violent reactions...

    Typical Dumbledore. Overload of work. "Let's see if the apprentices swim or sink!" and a mad twinkle on top of it.

    Draco makes me want to poke his eyes. He seemed genuinely worried about Snape, though. Good to know he has some emotions other than scorn and self-pity... He will be mplimplicated character, won't he?

    And the Daily Prophet did forget/wasn't told about the other familylines Harry belongs to. Typical. I get the feeling that Gentry isn't doing any good for the public picture, but I'd think that Potter and Caradoc Gryffindor lines wouldn't be so easily disregarded. Oh well, whatever sells the paper, I suppose...

    Do we hear more from Seamus' mother? Do we, do we? Or did you already tell that we would? Can't quite remember... It would be nice anyway!

    ~Petunia
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  • From ANON - Hexia on December 03, 2003
    I just can't stop!!! I had to read this chapter over and I'm still laughing!!!
    "the Snape patented glare #264--I am going to hex you so hard your ancestors will feel it."
    OMG!!! Where do you get these brilliant ideas from???? Do give me more!!!! *Giggles*

    Love to you
    Hexia

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  • From ANON - Hexia on December 03, 2003
    PS/ Lisa!!! You rock!!!! Just HAD to tell you!!!
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  • From ANON - Hexia on December 03, 2003
    AAAAAAHA, HA, HA, HA, Ha, Ha, Ha, ha!!!!! ::wiping tears from my eyes::
    Oh god!!! Aaaha, ha, ha, aha!!! That was SO hilarious!!! You really made me laugh there!!
    Do write more soon
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  • From ANON - Shawn Pickett on December 02, 2003
    Molly would have her say. Last I checked, none of her kids were in the bloody apprenticeship program. I know Dumbledore is doing the kindly old man bit, but him or Harry really need to tell her to go get stuffed. I also think Harry needs to arrange a little "suprise" for his "fan" Colin Creevy, little worm didn't waste any time selling him down the river, maybe Gred and Forge can help. Once again an outstanding chapter, can't wait to see what's next, keep up the outstanding work, thank you.
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on December 02, 2003
    Well... Draco and Harry can cooperate. I guess thats a start.
    (*grumbles* "He's still married to Pansy.") Snape seems to be
    getting better. And Remus is going to be his assistant... you sneaky
    author, you. lol. I can't wait to see those two together!

    Well, thanks for the new chapter.
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