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Reviews for Hogwarts Apprentices I--Gentry Green

By : LisaRoquin
  • From ANON - Elly on November 24, 2003
    Wonderful. I am rereading again. I noticed a word missing in this chapter, about half into the story in the following sentence:

    (Harry the Slytherin's of his year's talents about as well as his Gryffindor year mates because of the almost constant pairing of Gryffindor and Slytherin in double classes)

    I think that 'knew' is missing as a second word in that sentence.
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  • From ANON - Shawn Pickett on November 21, 2003
    Great chapter, I really liked the lineage getting revealed at the wedding, it ought to give the Weasley's a rude awkening. I wonder if Hermione and the Weasleys are going to get their head's out of their collective arse's and start ting ing Harry like the friends they claim to be. I also liked to see the shades of Malfoy coming around, or at least dropping the thought of serving moldyshorts. Can't wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - Hexia on November 21, 2003
    OH MY GOD!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Waywren Truesong on November 20, 2003
    *hauls self back into chair* Holhit-hit-. Um. Wow. Harry, you -do- realise that reguardless of sexual preference it's your duty to have kids, right? You're the last scion of waaaaaay too many lines.

    What's up with Molly, anyway? Why does Apprenticeship have her so freaked? What -is- 'the proper way of thinking'? Albus is doing it, so that can't be the problem, and it's not as if Harry's going to be anti-Muggle - if he isn't by now he isn't going to be -ever-.

    (Interesting - has Harry quite realised that thanks to Apprenticeship he's never going back to the Dursleys again? Perhaps he should mention that to Hermione.)

    Intriguing bit with the hair; I hope you give more details on the meaning of all this, and other little shades of meaning in Wizarding culture. Gift Child? Of Aisling no less! Shadowyn? Tho I -am- glad Harr fin finally having it long - there's not a thing wrong with his hair being too long and thus heavy to flutter about won't fix.

    Reread all the chapters before this; I'm glad Ginny's being at least semireasonable, if quiet. Someone to talk to, later. And the twins seem okay.

    Draco, do not play 'My suc sucks more than yours does' with Harry. You will not win.

    *cackles* I loved that - 'Draco, I am sick of your attitude. I am ripping open your box - have some sunlight. Tired of shit? Have some reality. Welcome to the real world, Jr Mushroom Man.'

    Very clever of Draco, naming Harry secondary Guardian. If it becomes neccessary, he -will- do it, and do it well, and Draco's once again nicely covered on all bases.

    Poor Sea. Don't fret so - Harry's used to public hoorahw, and after the Heir of Slytherin bit nobody will be focusing on his relations, fictional or otherwise, with -you-.
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  • From ANON - PeachDancer82 on November 20, 2003
    you know I really thought this would be a Draco Harry story, for which I really hope you can still do seeing as how Pansy's in love w/ Vin *hint hint* anywayPLEEEEASE? I really really enjoy your story and your writing style is simply amazing I thoughrly enjoy the plot lines you are setting up as well. I you could email me an update, i'd be grateful.
    ciao
    gquitto@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 20, 2003
    best way to put it FANFUCKINTASTIC vary good please countiune or a few people will die from waiting
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  • From ANON - Petunia on November 20, 2003
    Wow... (Again.) Am somewhat speechless at the moment. Bombs dropped to left and right. I guess Harry has a few questions to answer eventhough he escaped the Great Hall. And I bet he wants to get some answers, too - I know *I* want to! A *very* interesting cer. er. Hopefully 'the little terrors' let you write the next chapter fast...!
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  • From ANON - Kateri on November 20, 2003
    O Tha That was an amazing chapter. I thought Percy fainting was a nice touch. Well, Harry's lil bomb shell certainly will give the Slytherins something to think about.
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  • From ANON - Arwen Rayne on November 20, 2003
    Wow! Another fantastic chapter. I wish I could write this well.
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  • From ANON - jenbachand on November 20, 2003
    :) Yea!!! New chapter. And a great chapter at that. Interesting thing about the histories of the students. This is one of the most unique stories out there. Really enjoying it.

    Jen :)
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on November 20, 2003
    Wow! That's quite the lineage. LOL

    Loved the "political thinking" of Draco when he named Potter the sdarydary choice for guardian. Very Slytherin.

    Can't wait to read more. : )


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - Jenna on November 20, 2003
    Chapter sixteen was great. I can't wait for the next chapter so that I can see how everyone reacts to the news about Harry's anchestry. I hope that the next chapter also has some explination about everyone else's anchestry. I am particarly interested in Seamus and Blaise.
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  • From ANON - Hexia on November 18, 2003
    Let me just say this: WAAAAAAUUUUUUUUVVV! OMG!
    MORE!!! Please...?
    How do you do it?????? So
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  • From ANON - Jenna on November 16, 2003
    Chapter 15 is great. I can't wait for the next chapter. que question, is Neville going to be gay? If so, I think you should put him with Ron just to freak out the rest of the Weasley family. Just a suggestion. I really liked the way you have portrayed Harry. It's about time he was portd asd as more than a winey kid. Harry should have told Mrs. Weasley off sooner. She is not his mother/guardian even if she thinks she should be. The only person Harry should have to answer to is Remus as he is the only person left that cares about Harry Potter the person not Harry Potter The Boy Who Lived.
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  • From ANON - Kateri on November 15, 2003
    Wow! Thas ans an amazing chapter. I loved the scene with Hermione, she can be anoying at times and someone should take her down a peg or two. Just because she has an opinion on somethings nos not make it right. Harry's reply to her was great. I can't wait for the next chapter. I sinceraly hope that you continue to update frequently.
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