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Reviews for Hogwarts Apprentices I--Gentry Green

By : LisaRoquin
  • From ANON - Shawn ettoett on November 15, 2003
    Brilliant job! I loved this chapter. Thank god for Fred and George! It seemed like every other one of Harry's old "friends" left out of app apprentice program showed up at Hogwarts determined to prove just what an arse they can be. The funny part is, the way this is going, by the time Harry is done, they'll be kissing his arse every bit as much as they kiss Dumbledore's. While I am not a big fan of Harry slash stories, it would make an interesting development after all of the bullshit his "friends" gave Seamus. Again, wonderfull work, can't wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - Aurora on November 15, 2003
    Actually this is for chapter fifteen and the whole story. The chapter where you explained about the lineage postion and why the tattoos would appear on him, especially learning that the old families kept lineage grimoirs that were magically updated whenever the potion was used.

    Here is an idea: What if the Ministry of Magic has such a book and that whenever a marriage contract is enacted it gets put into the book? If a person where to take a lineage potion and or decide to have the tattoos appear on their skin, then this information automaticly goes out to the Ministry Lineage book and also to those who are hog ang any and all inheritances for the true heir. If this is true, What if the True Heir of the Lineage Line, in certain situations is the one that must be consulted and agree to any marriages or magical agreements concerning the family?

    Well, what if Harry Potter is the direct decendant of Salazar Slytherine through the second squib daughter that the wizarding world lost track of during that scandal that you wrote about that happened in the 1600's? That would mean that Harry Potter would have to approve the marriage contract of Draco Malfory has the Heir of the Slytherine families/clan. And knowing Fudge, he didn't bother to check to see if there was one he had to get approval from for the marriage contract to happen.

    Wouldn't it be funny if at the end of the sermon and everyone has to sign the contract and every signature on it magically bursts into flame scouring the signature sights cl And And after, magical writing appears in red where the contract words were saying that illegal marriage contract and penalties being inacted against the bride's family and Cornelius Fudge Minister of Magic. Then it adds, for attempting illegal marriage all former contracts and deals with or concerning Draco Malfoy are null and void Due to not being improved by The Heir of the Slytherine line Harry Potter bearer of the Slytherine Lineage tattoo.

    Your story has gotten me thinking and excited to read. I really like this new Harry Potter being blunt and telling how it is. He isn't going to take it from those who feels he should act a certain way. I wish Fudge and Percy would try and get into it with Harry I think he would make them sweat. I want to see Fudge and Percy get what they deserve. Here is Fudge trying to pass laws against the Aprentices and it would be heavily ironic if he loses his post as Minister because he violated an ancient marriage contract rules and rituals.

    I want to read more of this story and look forward to reading part sixteen. I think pompus Fudge and Percy are about to get a magor smack down for what they have done against those who don't agree with them. And Harry Potter, Draco Malfory, and the rest of the Apprentices are going to give it to them.



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  • From ANON - Waywren Truesong on November 15, 2003
    Actually, Kingsley Shacklebolt is a big black dude with no hair who looks like Morpheus. ^^ (At least I always imagine him so.)

    Oh, hell. Damn it, Nev! You're no good to them if you drive yourself into the ground - they'll just end up having to take care of -you-, too.

    *winces* I hate it that Harry can spot an abuse victim at fifty paces.

    *watches Harry think on his feet and give coherent, useful orders* -This- is why they put you in charge, Harry love. because you make the decisions... no matter how hard. Oh, Harry.

    *sigh* A little extreme on Hermione's part, but it -is- a logical reaction, from my impression or. r. I don't remember her being especially cruel to Luna, though.


    *blinks at Harry vs Molly Weasley* Um. Wow. *sigh* So is Molly a homophobe, or just freaked because Harry's ing ing in sin?' As if he's had -time- to live in sin. They're TOO F*CKING TIRED! But good on Harry for not taking any shit this chapter. He's just doing what he thought was right.


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  • From ANON - jenbachand on November 14, 2003
    Loving it. Too bad his "friends" are being gits about everything. Hope things settle down some soon, doubt it though, but the geneology and stuff is great. It's a great story.

    Jen :)
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  • From ANON - Petunia on November 13, 2003
    Oh dear. I start to feel exhausted by just reading this.

    ...What planet does Dumbledore live on...?
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  • From ANON - Kateri on November 13, 2003
    Dumbledore is nucking futs, he has to be. Malfoy's wedding, not listening to Harry, letting teenagers run Hogwarts.
    Great chapter, oh so very entertaining
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  • From ANON - Arwen Rayne on November 13, 2003
    Awesome, Darling. This has to be one of the best fics going currently. Thanks a bunch for putting so much into it for us.
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  • From ANON - Jenna on November 12, 2003
    I am really enjoying this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. I like the pairing of Remus and Severus. This story is so much better written then any of the other fics I have read detailing Harry's geneology. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Petunia on November 10, 2003
    This is geting scary! For my over-imaginative little brain anyway... The Order is in for serious trouble, methinks. It is no good that their spy is out of the picture for God knows how long. And Albus has little time to find a new teacher for potions. Not a very clever move from Shacklebolt. ...Do the Apprentices still trust the Order?

    *snigger* Seamus was so right with that last remark of his!
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on November 09, 2003
    Aww... Neville's taking the blame. I got a little exicted when Remus levitated
    Harry into the bed before I realized that it was very doubtful that any of them
    would be able to do anything anyway... oh well. Hope to see some Draco soon.
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  • From ANON - Shawn Pickett on November 09, 2003
    Great chapter, it should be an interesting conversation between Harry and Dumbledore, if Harry chooses to mention it. At the very least, Kingsley had probably better watch his back, I think Harry's a wee bit ticked at him. I liked Professor Snape reflecting that through ignorance and sheer determination Harry managed to, yet again, accomplish the impossible. I really like the way you have the characters growing in this story, and the writing style has been excellent, thank you, I can't wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - Kateri on November 09, 2003
    LOL, oh I love their excuse for Snape's injury. And Shacklebolt can't naysay that because he would have to come clean about what he did. Now he is going to be pulling his hair out trying to figure out how Snape kept his hands. I really love this story and can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Shawn Pickett on November 04, 2003
    Another great chapter, Harry seems to be rising to the occasion well. It will be interesting to see what Severus winds up thinking of him when this is all through. Great work, thank you.
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  • From ANON - Kateri on November 04, 2003
    Fascinating story, just love what you up up so far. The bit with the Gentry family is wonderful. I can't wait to read another chapter
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  • From ANON - Hexia on November 04, 2003
    Good cap!!!! :o)
    But I'm still dying for MORE!!!!
    Please be my favorit author and up date soon :o)
    Love
    Hexia
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