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Reviews for Hogwarts Apprentices I--Gentry Green

By : LisaRoquin
  • From ANON - Waywren Truesong on November 02, 2003
    ......-Wow-. Oh please say you're doing more. Please please please.

    I wish I could be more coherent, but it's six in the morning and I've been up since... er... six in the morning yesterday. Ehe.
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  • From ANON - Shawn Pickett on October 30, 2003
    Great chapter, the shit really has hit the fan at Hogwarts. The students are doing somewwellwell at handling the issues (though I see some first aid training with Madam Pomfry in their future.) Great work, can't wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - Hexia on October 30, 2003
    AAAAAAAH! You can't stop here!!!!!!!!!!
    PLEASE write more SOON!!!
    This is so good - action and all - I'm dying to know more!!!
    Please up date soon!!!

    love
    Hexia
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on October 29, 2003
    AAAHHH!!! They have to save Sev. Don't know why Karkaroff is there,
    but I'm sure we'll find out. And Draco was sent away? Hmm... maybe
    he'll come back in a better mood...
    Poor Remus, he feels worthless...
    Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - alioth on October 29, 2003
    i've really been enjoying your story, which is why i have to ask this question:

    did anyone proofread your chapter eleven? it's a mess. the story's great but your grammar and sentence structure flew out the window.

    if you'd like a beta, or another beta, feel free to email me.
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  • From ANON - Shawn Pickett on October 28, 2003
    Outstanding story, I find the whole apprentice program intriguing. I normally don't care for slash stories, but if this one does go slash, I would defintely keep reading. Great job, thank you.
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  • From ANON - Arwen Rayne on October 28, 2003
    Have I told you yet this week that I love your writing? Yeah!! I love your writing...
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on October 27, 2003
    Draco's still being a jerk. That figures.
    Well, maybe he'll grow up soon.
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  • From ANON - Petunia on October 27, 2003
    The same good quality as before, despite the problems!

    It will be interesting to see, how Draco will fit in with the rest of the apprentices - he seemed to have a little attitude problem for the thing... on top of his other problems. The seventh one: Luna Lovegood? She was going somewhere for the summer with her father, wasn't she?

    I guess, like Harry, that he can say goodbye to his friendship with Ron and Hermione. Hermione will be absolutely green with envy, and Ron will have kittens because the Weasleys don't have the money for him to partisipate. I can so see Hermione going into a rant about it not being possible for muggle borns to participate - and Merlin help those who dongreegree! It doesn't look like wou would be able to spend much time together anyway...

    That cauldron smuggler was a nice detail! *siggers*

    Well, it will be most interesting to see what you have in store for us in the future!

    ~Petunia
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on October 26, 2003
    sorry to hear about your computer problems.

    So, Sev. is Remus' mate? What about Harry? Maybe a threesome? lol... ok, maybe not.
    Is Sev. going to check Draco to see if he has tattoos too? And who's the third boy? Is it
    Neville? I hope you update again soon.



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  • From ANON - Veronica on October 26, 2003
    I know....I know (waves hand and jumps up and down, just like Hermione).......Remus's mate is Severus right....lol....the clues are there and I saw them. (at least I hope that right 'cause other wise I will look darn stupid..lol).....Please write more soon, this story is my favorite story on aff.net.......more asap please!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - jenbachand on October 25, 2003
    GREAT STORY!! I had been meaning to read this forever, but never got around to it. Glad I was able to take it all in at once. It's very interesting and surprisingly funny. Are you going to have the spell cast on Neville and Draco too? Wondering if they have the same kinds of protections. Update soon, and if you have an e-mail list for this story add me to it.

    Jen :)
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  • From ANON - PrideAndPrejudice on October 25, 2003
    Intersting...is Snape by chance Remus's life mate? if so odd pairing in my oppinion. but hey you are the writer after all....you have your reasonorryorry bout the computer crash...know how much that sucks. Just a thought, I know you will probably have it in later chapters but let the reader know who hellion ice viper and the rest are....it's kind of easy to see....but when you aren't reading closely most people won't catch it. Keep it up. it's wonderful.
    PAP
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  • From ANON - ciceronian on October 25, 2003
    Your story is very intriguing and immediately drew me in, I simply could not stop reading it. Really interested in the idea of Alice, Lily, and Narcissa being friends when they were young and using theior abilities to protect their children. Also, if my understanding is correct I love the idea of Sev being Remus' mate. Can't wait for your next update, keep up the amazing work! ~ciceronian~
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  • From ANON - Sarah on October 23, 2003
    I love this so far. How long will it be, approxamately? I wouldn't mind if it was a Harry/Draco fic and maybe Snape as a father figure to Harry. Just my thoughts, do what you want. I'lltinutinue reading anyway. I have not read anything like this before, but I love it. Keep the chapter coming!
    Good luck!
    Sarah
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