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Reviews for Hogwarts Apprentices I--Gentry Green

By : LisaRoquin
  • From ANON - Jamie on September 11, 2004
    Hey :) Reread the chap again; still love it. FINALLY have net access now, so I'm thrilled... Was pseudo-hoping that a chap would "magically" be posted at about the same time, in some sort of freaky coincidence, but alas, such is not to be... So, er, um, any chance of a chap soon? *hopeful looks* ... (and yes, I do kinda hate myself for turning into a chapter-begging-groupie (as opposed to the mere "groupie" that i was before! lol), but since it's been six weeks since you last posted, i just wanna make sure you haven't abandonded your story... my guess is you started school up again and got caught up in classwork (if you're not a student/prof, then this excuse does not work for you :-P hehehe)...) Anyway, basically I just wanted to let you know that there are still people out here who care about and love this story, and just wanted to make sure that you hadn't abandoned it. :) Ciao!
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  • From ANON - celticdewin on August 26, 2004
    I don't suppose begging will help you post the next chapter. Please, Please! Please post soon. I'm dying to know what happens!
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on July 24, 2004
    One more thing, WTF?! Grindwald was a Gryffindor?! Although it shouldn't shock me, anyone remember Wormtail, aka Peter Pettigrew?! He was in Gryffindor too! The books never specified which house the Marauders were in, but I'm fairly certain from Snape's pensive, that all 4 were in Gryffindor. Cuz Sirius said something about him getting hell from his birth family cuz he was sorted in Gryffindor, and James was defintely in Gryffindor! I know for certain in cannon, if Peter and Remus were sorted in Slytherin, that Padfoot and Prongs never would have given the latter 2 the time of day. And I recall for some odd reason, the House members almost never socialize with any other students from other houses... I dunno why! Yet, Remus and Peter were strong friends with James and Sirius, leading me to believe that the 4 were all in the same house...
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on July 24, 2004
    *whistles* Interesting development with Moony and Snape! *lets out a huge sigh of relief* Good! Moody is on the kids's side! It's a releif, cuz Harry and Co needs all the adults they can trust...I dunno about Tonks, I don't know her that well. But I read the books, and I remember she's on Harry's side...Cuz she was Sirius's cousin...And Harry's Sirius's godson... I guess Harry is all Tonks has left of Sirius. But, I have a question, that Rowlings never answered! I know Sirius is Harry's godfather, but who is his godmother?!!!
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  • From ANON - celticdewin on July 23, 2004
    I hope you update soon! I read the whole thing in on sitting and I'm hooked!
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  • From ANON - Carmella on July 23, 2004
    Hey more please! Your just getting to thE good stuff! I need to have more!
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  • From ANON - bagheera on July 23, 2004
    Ah! Finally the plot is thickening! For some chapters everything was like "Harry's SO STRESSED" and "Dumbledore's SO STUPID" and not much else, so it felt as if the story wasn't getting forward, even though it was neither boring nor badly written.
    But now! Finally Remus and Severus are getting somewhere. And there's a motivation nd Dnd Dumbledore. A new prophecy.

    I'm curious ... are we going to learn more about Harlan Gentry? His characters is mysterious but sounds fascinating. I adore that name! And possibly more about Grindelwald?
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  • From ANON - Jamie on July 22, 2004
    FREAKIN' A!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU DID IT AGAIN!!!!!!!! :) hahaha. Wow. (I meant to commend you on the last chapter too, but...) Anyway, this was a great chapter. It was a bit shorter than your usual, but I'm not complaining; it said what it needed/wanted to say, and did that quite well. I'm positively ECSTATIC that you updated just now; I leave the country in a few days, and given your turnover rate between chapters, l prl probably have internet access by the time the next chapter comes up! :) hehehe; I'm simply overjoyed. (Ok, geez, now I sound like a gushing fangirl, but I really AM appreciative of your good timing, and I really DO love your story.) I love that you've finally brought the Remus/Snape thing into play now. One question about the mirrors (which was a stroke of genius, btw): does this mean that at least one of them will always have to be in the tower to monitor the mirrors? And if so, one of the four, or one of the 8 bonded? And if there is, for instance, a fight, how do they go to break it up? Or is it just so that they know that it HAPPENED? :-/ hmmm... there's a thought... ok, I see, you're going for the "Dumbledore always knows what's going on in the castle even if he does nothing about it" card. :) ok. Oh, and speaking of, he's being such an enormous prat; it's astonishing, really, to see him portrayed in such a "not your overly insightful, eccentric grandfather" type. However, you are writing this Dumbledore *very* well. Oh, and though it was chapters and chapters ago, I wanted to commend you on Harry noticing that there's no way Dumbledore wouldn't've noticed the whohambhamber of Secrets thing. You caught that anomaly in your "ing ing the wards" theory right away, and dealt with it. :) .... Sigh, ok, so I'm just *really* happy that there was another chapter today... Keep up the FANTASTIC work! :-D
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  • From ANON - crissy on July 22, 2004
    oh! that was good. vey good. so good hat i'm not very articulate at the moment. so good. please don't hold me in suspense to long. unless you have to. i mean i wouldn't want you to quit your job and becaome destitute because you were listening to me and finishing writing the fic. that wouldn't be very good, but it would be a very nice sentiment. and i want you to eat too. you don't want to stop doinh that so that you can have more time to read. that would be bad. but if you could just not hold me in suspense too lon that would be great. this chapter was so good. and then the ending, ack! it was just haging there practically in the middle of a sentence. more soon. please. if its not too much trouble. bye.
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  • From ANON - lessa on July 19, 2004
    This is a great story. I read it completely in one sitting...put a major dent in my thesis time but well worth it. I love you characterization, especially Dumbledore and Snape. I always love to read canon Snape. In short, one of the few truly original fics out there.

    For those of us who can't wait for the next update I would recommend visiting the authors homepage. She has some great fic there. My fav has to be a Buffy/HP crossover Parent Trap challenge fic featuring Wesley twins sorted into Slytherin. Lots of wonderful snarky Snape. http://www.angelfire.com/crazy3/lisaroquin/sswsindex.html

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  • From ANON - DBZVelena on July 04, 2004
    And anothreatreat chapter of a story so good it could rival the original.
    Have you ever considered writing for a living?
    You're stories would no doubt rock the universe!
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  • From ANON - Ginger on June 28, 2004
    Wonderful I wait for each chapter to come out.
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  • From ANON - dedmun on June 28, 2004
    like this story lots. am enjoying it greatly. keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - lisatiza84 on June 27, 2004
    awesome. awesome. awesome. I love every little letter of this story. *sitting on edge of chair waiting for updates*
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  • From ANON - annie on June 26, 2004
    freakin wonderful.. stupid senile old Dumbledore, he really is a crazy manipulating bastard. finally harry is starting to realize this can
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