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Reviews for Hogwarts Apprentices I--Gentry Green

By : LisaRoquin
  • From ANON - crissy on March 15, 2004
    it's hard not to love ths fic. and even harder to criticize it. but i do have a suggestion to make. your summary sucks. you need to change it. it took me way too long to give this fic a try because your summary was so uninteresting. do you realize how many times i passed this fic by until i finally clicked on the link to see what it was? and then only because i was curious sincei had seen the title so many times. well i can tell you. way too many times. change your summary. make it more enticing. don't hide this fic away with a bad summary. evereveryone read it. and write another chapter soon so i can read more. ;)
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  • From ANON - Arwen Rayne on March 11, 2004
    Yeah! That was fun. I really love the way you are turning the boys into sensitive caring macho men! And, yes, I love the Dumbledore bashing. I am sure he is going to turn out to be a wonderful old man in JKRs books but he just SO needs his arse kicked.
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  • From ANON - Petunia on March 09, 2004
    Dumbledore is an idiot - he really has no idea what he is doing, has he? Why should Harry's portkey take him to Hedmaster's office if the others go to the tower? If Dumbledore fears he might have been taken against his will, wouldn't the hospital wing be more logical destination? Poor Albus is really loosing his touch... And trying to make decisionr Har Harry again. Tsk, tsk.

    Now I'm *really* curious: what was in the letter from Angelina??? I have a few guesses, but is any of them even near the truth...?

    And then that ending with a promise of an interesting discussion... You truly know how totureture your readers, don't you, Lisa? *pout*

    ~Petunia
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  • From ANON - dave gerecke on March 09, 2004
    i like it.
    Hope you up date soon.
    dave
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  • From ANON - tamargrl on March 08, 2004
    enjoying the story, complex though it may be. In fact, this most recent chappie was almost a little too complex. I know you don't want to explain too much for fear of ruining the story, but you may want to check to make sure things make sense. It can be hard to write about the kinds of communication that goes on between a close-knit group of people (i. e. at the funeral) because sometimes the reader misses out on what's going on as much as the characters that are outside the group. I got the gist of what happened, but felt I missed a lot.
    Otherwise I really like the story. You do a great job of writing and the plot is very cool. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - WriterLady1031 on March 08, 2004
    Another interesting chapter. That bit at the end with Fred and Hermione talking was interesting and added another twist to the story. This is getting really good and I'll be back for more.

    Ciao!
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  • From ANON - GEmory on March 07, 2004
    Ron is still being an idiot, and a twin got married! I love this story. Especially love how Harry and the group are pushing Dumbledore aside and taking charge of their lives. At least, at much as they can. I also like how Hermione is getting closer to Fred, and that he's being so supportive. Hopefully, Hermione and Harry will be rebuilding their friendship as well.
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  • From ANON - DBZVelena on March 07, 2004
    This is one of the best stories i've read in a long time!
    I'm keeping track of it as you update.
    But I really hope Harry will get at least a little break soon. Or he'll go stir crazy!
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  • From ANON - not telling on February 29, 2004
    pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease can we have the next chapter soon?
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  • From ANON - dave gerecke on February 28, 2004
    Come on. Up date already. I need my fix.
    Am presently re-reading the other chapters again (3rd time through or 4th) and want my fix.
    dave
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  • From ANON - shelleykids on February 22, 2004
    Exelant very nice reactions lol I think the head master needed to be put in his spot lol keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - dave gerecke on February 21, 2004
    I hope you are not going to pair Harry off in a slash because of the binding of Hogwarts. To me that would be n/c and I feel that he deserves a choice.
    dave
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  • From ANON - dave gerecke on February 20, 2004
    come on, get with it. Write some more.
    I need my fix.
    Chaining you to your chair may become required and the whips are still available if need be to improve your writing speed.
    dave
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  • From ANON - Jen on February 18, 2004
    Wonderful chapter as always! I am really glad that Harry gave dumbledore a good telling off.. it was about time... lol all i keep thinking is goodness wait til ron finds out that harry and the others are bound to the castle... NOT TO LEAVE..... i think he'll be an even bigger prat :) keep up the great work on the fic, and i will be looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - crissy on February 18, 2004
    albus admitting he is wrong. has thew world gone mad?
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