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Reviews for Quiesetis

By : akuMau
  • From ANON - tamargrl on November 03, 2003
    No, you cann't just leave it at that. And you sure as hell can't get us to review it by threate to to not continue. Oh, wait, you just did. Happy now? Now get back to work and finish this story.
    On a more friendly note, good work! It's a different take than I'm used to, I like Hermione's muggle experiences. But there's not enough magic. One little, itty bitty chappie don't count. In other words, more! (Ok, that was just one word, but you get the point.)
    In terms of critiques, the dad's tirade was a wee bit trite, but ok. Mostly I like the writing style. I like what you did with the dream and I hope you do some more. I'd like to see you get into their minds a little more, cuz what you started with is intriguing.
    Now are you happy? :)
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  • From ANON - XxphenixX on November 03, 2003
    Threatening your readers, are we? Tsk tsk tsk. If I wasn't so intrigued by this story, I'd be appalled enough to stop reading. Just kidding. Now, you say you want some constructive criticism... how about "update fa?" ?" Do you think that myself leaving 10 reviews, each with a different name and containing some sort of blatant threat on your life if you didn't update, would help you write faster? But seriously, I do like this story. The Hermione's-life-isn't-so-perfect thing is slightly cliche but it's certainly well-written... and as I said before, the dream was really intriguing and I'm on the edge of my oh-so-comfortable-swivelly chair... what happens?
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  • From ANON - Jules on October 09, 2003
    OOhh! I am curious as to where this will go. likelike how you are building the story and that we don't have all the information from this point of view.
    Awaiting an update!
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