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Reviews for Seeking the Star

By : alioth
  • From ANON - SailorAurora on October 12, 2003
    hehehehe, I like this. not only is Harry happy again.. he gets to surpise and shock the potions master. I love a shocked, surpised snape. *smirks*
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  • From ANON - I Got Tired of Waiting on October 11, 2003
    :) Hi there...
    I have no problems with Harry having found his strands so quickly--epiphanies are always fast and a little scary. I had not thought about it, but I agree you need more of an edge to Dumbledore although I think Snape is spot on. This is going interesting places and I am eagerly anticipating the next installment.
    IGToW
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  • From ANON - SAK on October 10, 2003
    I am enjoying this story. It is intriguing and I look forward to seeing how the story develops, understanding the pull of power Harry has.
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  • From ANON - Sky on October 10, 2003
    Please do continue.
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  • From ANON - your roommate on October 10, 2003
    Oh the one major thing that bothered me is Dumbledore, we have seen him be kind, but this is far beyond the bounds we have witnesses, much too much the kindly old man and none of the power that is behind that. I think you have reduced him to be less than he is, he isn't a saint, and Harry's rational for forgiving him didn't sit right either, even if it was to protect him it was still a wrong that has gone uncompensated for, and it was uncalled for to begin with. The flip-flop of Dumbledore is going to bother me, I w thi think you should ensure you don't loose the part of Dumbledore that makes him so powerful, the kindness and the harsh wisdom, now you have only the kindness and none of the practical aspects, for him right now, for everything he has done to Harry to suddenly say never mind all I have done to you you are special enough now not to worry about Tom even thought I have dedicated your life to it.
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  • From ANON - your roommate on October 10, 2003
    Alright alioth dear I've read it. I can see Harry acting this way for one reason alone, he was very much like that when he started at Hogwarts, however, the old school griffendorish concept is stiot sot sitting quite right this might merely have to do with personal preceptions. It seems sudden that he was able to work thr his his strands so quickly, I would think it would have taken a while, it is one thing to suddenly relieze that you must and another to accept this pieces of you so quickly. I will be interesting in seeing how the summer went if you cover that more. Going to Snape is both daring and slightly arrogant, which way I cae ite it working.

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  • From ANON - Suni on October 10, 2003
    please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Ox King on October 10, 2003
    Hum.. What to say? I've like thea ofa of Harry letting go of his anger and the way he did was original. I'm use to reading Harry angery and usualy keeping his anger. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and what Harry has to say to Snape. Also, this new power Mr. Potter has and what will come of it.
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  • From Slant on October 10, 2003
    I have to say I
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  • From ANON - Sly on October 10, 2003
    It's good. I love it. Now go make some more chapters

    - Sly
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