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Reviews for The Diary

By : Lizski
  • From ANON - Rilla on October 11, 2003
    Okay, you got me so hooked that I had to go over to Whispers to read the whole thing. Lovely job!
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  • From ANON - Helena on October 11, 2003
    Hmmm,very good,very good indeed!!!
    Just loving it!!!
    I think this is going to be veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery interesting!!!!
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  • From ANON - Daya on October 11, 2003
    I'm really enjoying this, I love the idea that Snape is torn between his voyueristic instincts, and actually NOT reading the diary, oh please let Ole be a right randy goat who does nothing but attempt to hit on Mione so she goes running straight into the arms of our darling Severus...

    *wipes drool from keyboard before accident can occur*

    Hope this conts!
    s!

    Daya
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on October 11, 2003
    Agreed, the two wouldn't just 'hop into bed together on the slightest whim'.

    I'm definitely enjoying this well written story. : ) The interview was especially fun. I look forward to more.


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - SandraM on October 11, 2003
    YAY! Finally, someone else who thinks that characters need to develop into a relationship. I was beginning to think I was the only one!
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  • From ANON - Persephone on October 11, 2003
    How did Severus get a copy of the diary? Interested to see which one of them will confess first. Very entertaining but I do hope you haven't abandoned Lucius. ;)
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  • From ANON - Laerai on October 11, 2003
    Hehe. Invade someones privacy, but you might not get desired answers! Ya gotta be careful. Her diary has some really funny comments but the overall story is more serious. I like the combinations.
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  • From ANON - SandraM on October 10, 2003
    I'm not sure what I'm getting the bigger laugh out of, your story of Sev and Hermione, or the one about Lucius and Hermione. They're both terrific!
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  • From ANON - Laerai on October 10, 2003
    Good. Suspenseful, with a good plot. I'm glad you don't let the diary be the all consuming part of this. But its presence is greatly intriguing. I wonder how he got it. Albus, perhaps?
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 10, 2003
    So how did Sevvie get the diary? *I hate mysteries:P* He is going to endlessly tease her, isnt't he? Yay! Great so far! How did I ever miss this at Whispers?

    Dumbledore as the matchmaker again. I love that. That is so believeable and it warms my heart! Thanks.

    Heather
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  • From ANON - J.P. on October 10, 2003
    I LOVE what you've written so far!!!!!!! Please write more soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - GeekGoddess on October 10, 2003
    hehehe...I love this.....you are such a good storyteller....I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Sare Liz on October 09, 2003
    This is an excellent story and I'm so glad that I found it. I can't wait to see what happens next. i'm particularly interested in finding out how Severus got the copy of her diary. Hmm. I'm sure that will be an interesting twist.

    Anyway, thank you so much for writing. I look forward to reading your updates.
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  • From ANON - Irol on October 09, 2003
    Well first off i really like the story. *smiles* well in the second chapter i was wondering when he was going to read the diary. how did he get a copy? hmmm... It was funny that he did in the third. Naughty Severus reading other peoples thoughts. tsk,tsk.

    Wonders how you are going to keep her there to be an apprentice.

    well i hope that there will be another chapter soon. Now i remember why i dont write down everything in a journal.
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