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Reviews for Triumph Out of the Bitter Taste of Ashes

By : Kiristeen
  • From ANON - shemhamforash on October 23, 2003
    Well, Sev hasn't worked out why 'Mione wants to be around him....I think we can mark this down as one of his more dense moments....*grin*...And I am not necessarily referring to THAT whole situation either....

    Not making any sense?...Hmmmm....no caffine yet this morning would exlain that...

    Loving it as always...wanting more oh talented one...

    Shem xxx
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  • From ANON - Barrie on October 23, 2003
    Poor Severus, he just doesn't seem to understand that what Hermione needs is some normalcy in her life. Detention with Snape snarling at her as though nothing had happened must have been quite a relief for her. I remember after my own experience, how everyone tiptoed around me as if I were mentally disabled or something. Personally I was hurt, but more angry than anything. I just wanted people to stop talking to me like I was an infant. I totally understand what Hermione is going through. I also remember the denial phase quite well, the anger phase should be interesting to see.
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  • From farfie on October 23, 2003
    Ah, Sev and his anger control. Quite the journey, that. hehe. Hmmm, I wonder why Granger wanted to finish a detention anyway. maybe to feel a bit normal again?
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on October 23, 2003
    I know that she has a lot to deal with (or avoid dealing with), but what's up with Hermione? Is she just thankful that Snape is treating her as he always has OR did she thank hin for the items she snagged while doing inventory? Looking forward to finding out ;-) Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Andrian on October 23, 2003
    Intriguing and Sev is so in character kudos. Looking forward to what is to come between all parties involved.
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  • From ANON - jen on October 21, 2003
    Ron/Draco is so unexpected, but it seems to work within the plot.

    Poor 'Mione.
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  • From ANON - Laerai on October 21, 2003
    I love this story. Why the hell did I wait so long in starting it?!! It's complex and multifaceted. I like that it focuses on lots of different plots, rather than just one main thing like lots of other stories (Not to knock the other stories, they're cool too)
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  • From ANON - farfie on October 21, 2003
    AWWWW! dracoa dn ron walking hand in hand! that's SO cute!!!!! *giggles*

    and i like Severus being all protective, in an non-overly sort of way. and i totally agree with you, he is protective of the students in the books.
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  • From ANON - Deb>^..^< on October 21, 2003
    So much anxiety & frustration!!! I am glad that Ron figured out Hermione's situation on his own. I am wondering what choice Hermione will make as far as the baby? Will she take Draco into consideration when making her choice? Will she be able to live with herself if she chooses not to keep it? Looking forward to your next update*
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  • From ANON - shemhamforash on October 21, 2003
    Ron isn't exactly the brightest star in the night sky now is he?...But he does get there in the end...Sweet really...and...awwww... choochy-choochy-coo...Ron and Draco are getting Lovey Dovey....

    Sev is drowning his sorrows...and 'Mione has isolated herself....Yep..everything seems in order here..shall move on until next time...

    Wanting more...

    Shem xxx
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  • From ANON - alioth on October 21, 2003
    aww, you tricked me into thinking you'd actually added chapter fifteen, when all that you added was notes. sigh.
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  • From ANON - Shanta-k on October 20, 2003
    It is nicely written, though I have two little problems with it... First is that the plot goes almost mundanely slow after the first few chapters, then out of no where here is 'Mione. Where was the suspence of trying to find her, the searching and the fight to regain her memories. I really like how your waterfall of emotions is played with Malfoy never really feeling things like guilt and such. Very well done. My second problem is the most inportant....IT'S NOT DONE YET....lol don't worry, I know good work takes time to make. I'm a writer myself, a writer not a speller. There is a diff you know. ;D Well anyways, it's a really good story and I would really like to read the rest of it. Oh and for the record, This is the first story I have ever reveiwed so feel lucky, and my msn is out of date...-_-"
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  • From ANON - Rilla on October 20, 2003
    Another fabulous chapter! I can't believe it's been 15 chapters already. I can't wait for more...

    I like the way Draco was fighting internally not to think the word "fainted". And his reflections on the kiss.
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  • From ANON - shemhamforash on October 19, 2003
    Back again...I read over your authors note from that chapter and after posting my lateset review realised I mentioned Sev being over-protective...I hope you didn't see it as a sledge or attack on the characterisation you had chosen to give him...I would never do that mainly because I am a firm and vocal believer that all the accusations thrown at authors for making him OOC is a whole lot of smelly bullshit...All we know about him is what JK tells us, the rest as you have said, is up to personal interpretion...My whole reason for musing on the issue was to "think"out aloud (or rather write) that maybe there was something then Sen Sev's part that we haven't yet been exposed to...it was most certainly not a jab at you for having him OOC...I would never consider that as I have stated...

    Hope this clears the issue up from my part...

    Shemxxx
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on October 19, 2003
    If I'm reading this right, in chapter 14, does Hermione not know yet? Draco really has a lot to work out & Hermione will too. Will be watching for your next chapter*
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