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Reviews for Triumph Out of the Bitter Taste of Ashes

By : Kiristeen
  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on April 22, 2004
    GLAD YOU'RE BACK!!!

    Chapter 31... Things seem to be going better between Harry & Draco, at least part of the time!!! I think Draco is finding that he & Harry have more in common than he would really like to admit!!!

    I will be interested in seeing how Draco & Hermione interact now that Draco is aware that he WILL have a sibling!!! Looking forward to seeing more of these 3 as well as Severus & Hermione!!! Til chapter 32, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on April 21, 2004
    I am glad that you updated. Please don't make us (okay... me) wait for so long.
    What was Draco's dream all about? Ron is so sweet with him.
    Cheers.
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  • From ANON - kitsune-oni on April 09, 2004
    ARGH! You can't just leave it there! That's plain evil, I tell ya.
    Looking forward to tons more, especially more Snape/Hermy, though I have to admit I'm liking Ron/Draco as well.

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  • From ANON - kitsune-oni on April 09, 2004
    First of all - this fic is amazing!
    The flow is wonderful, I really couldn't stop reading (even reading it during class), and the pace is perfect. I like how you develop the relationship between Snape and Hermione, and I also like the new outlook on him - too many people are blinded by Harry's POV and Harry's just .... one person. I still haven't finished reading what's posted, but I hope there's some more hinting at SS/HG (or maybe some actiheehheehee...)
    Draco and Ron's second kiss (on the train) was way too cute!! When I started reading the fic I was a bit eugh at the pairing but you've written it quite well and it doesn't seem so strange. I can't believe anyone would bother you about it; I thought it was written quite well.
    Also, your idea on genetics and the whole pureblood dilemma is really interesting and, if I think about it, could possibly be true. Well, I've only done the basics in genetics myself but it all made sense....
    I'm glad Harry's off to a side, because I was a little tired of him. Oh, I love also how you characterize Draco, his concerns and doubts and feelings...
    Okay, I might as well just say I love everything about this fic (which would be true). Actually, the only thing I don't like is knowing that the whole story isn't posted yet (a friend told me).
    Back to reading~~~
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  • From ANON - Nymphadora Lupin on March 23, 2004
    I keep checking every single day. When will you post the next chapter??
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  • From ANON - Beatrice on March 21, 2004
    Please please do not abandon this fic! It is so well written and I've been waiting for an update for ages. Thoughought that I might be waiting in vain is too much torment to bear so please, please update!
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  • From ANON - Lucifera on March 04, 2004
    Wow, this is just getting better and better!

    I keep wondering who it has been that was behind Hermione when she went to the library in London ... maybe someone we have not yet seen in this story? Someone who has "disappeared"? But how would she know?

    Oh, and I am looking forward to getting more information about that "Ginny-as-a-ghost"-thing ...

    And, just to point it out: At some point you wrote that there were no Blacks left, but according to fam family tree in Grimmauld Place, Draco and of couse Narcissa would be the last of that "Noble and Most Ancient House", wouldn't they?

    And I wonder what Hermoine will tell her parents next; after all, they know she is pregnant. They must be concerned about her physical and psychological health and surely would want to know if she terminated the pregnancy (but Snape told them as well as Hermione that it was too late for that) or planned to give the child up for adoption. At least, I would expect some letters from them.

    And then there's Ron and Draco ... and Harry ... and Bill's "surprise" for his parents ... and ... and ... and ... so, just stop reading this insane review and go on writing more of the actual story! ;)


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  • From ANON - mele on February 20, 2004
    "he was in deeper than he thought possible..." ack! i'm clueless! why would he think that? is he going to offer to marry her? or is he going to ask draco to marry her? or at least provide for the baby? help, help! how do you keep an idiot in suspense? don't update! please hurry and take pitty on me! aloha, mele
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  • From ANON - Sharon on February 19, 2004
    I'm so glad you're updating this story!!! You've developed a unique slant on the plot and I for one love it!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter as things appear to be getting interesting to say the least. I'm assuming they will talk at some future point, right? That plot twist dess des development as it would offer a different spin on the bitter Snape and his hatred for James Potter. Great emotional challenge/link for Hermione to be forced to view the baby to Harry. Great work
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  • From ANON - crissy on February 19, 2004
    you know i don't think i like how slow severus is in this fic. really shouldn't he have realixed several chapters ago that he was in deep emotional water with hermione. she has been so attached to his mere presence that i cannot imagine it being otherwise. then again maybe this is part of his reverting to typical male from previous male spy role. hmm?
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  • From ANON - Candace on February 19, 2004
    I am kind of disappointed that there will not be a Snape, Hermione and baby makes 3 ending........I had hoped for it......But why am i starting to think that that is what is going to ha, bu, but it will not be Hermione and Snape??? Could you possibly be thinking of a Draco, Ron and Hermiones' baby makes 3 ending? oh god no.....please say it isn't so........oh well I'll keep reading and hoping that you change your mind.

    The story is good.....tragic and way angsty, but up to your normal perfection........

    It just makes me want to grab my stuffed Hermione doll and tell her what to do....LOL
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  • From ANON - bansidh on February 19, 2004
    Ch 32

    Wow. That last paragraph was brilliant. I could feel his shift in perception. Amazing, that. You have a rare gift for word choice that carves keenly to the picture that you want to show your readers. Thanks very much for writing. :)
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  • From ANON - summer on February 19, 2004
    This is a great story. I have been following it from the begining. I was so afraid that after the dark begining you would throw Severus and Hermione together in a fast, happy pink flowers type of love relationship. I am so glad that there is a slow buildup of mutual respect and perhaps later, love. Can't wait to see what happens next with Ron/Drace and Sev/Hermione. This is really one of my favorite fics!
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  • From ANON - crudedly on February 19, 2004
    toooooo short! I wanna know what kind of family they are going to put the baby in!
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on February 19, 2004
    Okay Kiristeen, now we are getting somewhere. I don't know why, but whenever writers have chapters expressing Severus's feeling, I start to believe the possibility of sex, romance, relationships, whatever. It is his perspective that needs to be fleshed out to make it believable. Do you know what I mean? He is the harder nut to crack, so to speak.
    Anyway, (after all the blathering) thanks for the chapter. Really liked it and I hope you write more soon.
    bye.
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