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Reviews for The Marriage Law

By : Witchcraft
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 15, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

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  • From ANON - Alexandra Noel on February 01, 2006
    First off, this is angelgrl198816, I was not able to login tonight -sigh-
    I LOVE this story! PLEASE make a SEQUEL! What about the next heir of Slytherin?! Mentioning that...RON EVIL! WOW! THAT WAS UNEXPECTED! THIS story seemed so...real...I applaud you! *claps*

    angelgrl198816 AT hotmail Dot com

    Please and Thank YOU!,
    Alexandra17
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  • From ANON - Gene on February 08, 2005
    Not that it particularly matters but I thought I would tell you that Hermione's middle name is Jane. I like the name Isis but for some reason I am stuck on Jane as it fits Hermione more! Ya- just thought I'd share the info. Not trying to be a prat or anything so don't wig out on me! :)
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  • From FrenchMaidenForLucius on November 03, 2004
    This story was really good. It didn't stray off too much and it was consistant.
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  • From ANON - Raija on December 09, 2003
    now the flitwick thingy makes sense but yo could have told us that he was a ghost a little earlier.
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  • From ANON - raija on December 09, 2003
    didn't flitwick die in the final battle. Your story is so weird. first someone day and suddenly they are alive nd things like that allover your story.
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  • From ANON - raija on December 08, 2003
    ah how medieval to have one's head off.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 20, 2003
    Good storyline... Have you taken English?
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on November 19, 2003
    I've been reading your story from the start & will finish it with your last chapter, hoping it will be coming soon as I am curious to see how you end this story!!! Til then, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on November 14, 2003
    Despite major inconsistencies, this is a py iny interesting take on the WIKTT challenge. I'm surprised that with Arthur Weasley as the new Minister that the marriage law hasn't been repealled.
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  • From ANON - elvirasnape on November 13, 2003
    Oh my goodness I am soooooo happy that you used the name Elvira for lucius' daughters name. I am soooooo happy!!!!!!! I also must say that I am still loving your story because it is great. I have reread the story twice while I waited for new chapters and everytime I read it I loved it even more. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Sharpie\'s Whore on November 07, 2003
    First of all, it's TRAITORS, not traderers.
    Secondly, this is drivel. It's all right to have all sorts of plot twists, but for heaven's sake, SHOW the action, don't narrate ithis his isn't Reader's Digest. Illustrate what is happening rather than just telling it.
    And third, why does Hermione have to be this great heir? Could she not just be a normal person, doing extraordinary things? An extraordinary person doing extraordinary things doesn't have near the dramatic impact as a normal person rising above and beyond their lot in life.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on November 07, 2003
    Too Funny, the big, bad Death Eater fainted;-) Hevereverything works out with your internet!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Rileywolf133 on November 01, 2003
    I love your story so far, though I love all of your fics, but that's not the point. I can't wait until the next update, but I also wanted to point out something. You said that they had Advanced Charms with Flitwick, but didn't he die in the final battle? Just wanted to point that out to you. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Missy Black on November 01, 2003
    WOW! Update soon, this is a great HG/SS ficlet.


    -Missy Black
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