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Reviews for The Marriage Law

By : Witchcraft
  • From ANON - Missy Black on November 01, 2003
    WOW! Update soon, this is a great HG/SS ficlet.


    -Missy Black
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on November 01, 2003
    Will you be telling about Harry's wedding & bringing Luna back in? I'm still curious about Tonks & Moody also? Looking forward to seeing how Sev handles being a daddy*
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  • From ANON - Carmella on October 31, 2003
    Hey its good, but can we finish the stroy truly would love to see Snap acting like a father or how he reacts to holding his kids. . .I like ethwhole end of this chapter thing to hehehe
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  • From ANON - Dark Lady Trinity on October 31, 2003
    Hey! Love this fic, Potter. Hurry up and write a new chapter, you've had me hooked for 3 days, reading this great piece of work. See you later!

    Dark Lady Trinity
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on October 29, 2003
    Just read chapters 21-23.... What's going to happen with Luna? Are Moody & Tonks going to end up with child? Where did Remus go & will he be back? Waiting to see what chapter 24 brins*
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  • From ANON - Kathy on October 29, 2003
    Your story ideas are great, but please be more careful with your spelling! Some of your mistakes were quite funny (my favorite was "trader" instead of "traitor", but it did distract from an otherwise interesting story to try to find out what you actually meant. I would also like to see you take more time in developing the people in your story. Thanks for the good read.
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  • From Shiv5468 on October 29, 2003
    I always try to find something positive to abo about a fiction but it is very hard in this case. Your grammar and spelling are truly appalling. Its prophecy not prophacy; discover traderers in their midst - so they are going to discover people who buy and sell goods amongst them, I can see how frightening that would be. And Snape decides to buy his unborn 'child' a pony, when they are having a boy and a girl - that should be children. And what on earth is he buying foetuses a pony for anyway - it would be years before they could ride it!

    You seem to have a beta which makes this even more annoying. If you aren't prepared to take the time and effort to work on your stories, what are you writing for?
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  • From kojiro on October 25, 2003
    Very very very cool story! I like the way that Lucius is a different person... keep up the good work and ill be cjecking back frequently for updates!!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on October 24, 2003
    So much going on in poor Hermione's life, both good & bad. So much to deal with for someone do young. I will be watching for your next update*
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  • From ANON - Dark Emerald on October 23, 2003
    this is a great fic. i cant wait to read the next chapter. keep up the good work.
    its well written and has kept me waiting for the future chapters. its really good.

    thank you

    Dark Emerald

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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on October 23, 2003
    I just finished chapters 16 & 17 & am still very much enjoying this story!!! I'm glad to hear that Hermione will be having twins & that Luc& Iv& Ivy will have a daughter (maybe that baby will finaly get Lucius 100% sraightened out & wrapped around her tiny finger). Will be watching for your next update*
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  • From ANON - Kate on October 21, 2003
    You need another beta reader. Not only is the grammar and spelling generating, but the plot has gone downhill as well. The heir of Ravenclaw idea is pathetic and cliched. Think first, darling
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  • From ANON - KJSparkles on October 20, 2003
    Hey!

    Did you get my email with the edits to about 4 or 5 chapters? I sent it about a week ago. Let me know if you didn't, and I'll re-edit them. Do you want me to continue editing for you?
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on October 20, 2003
    Glad to see that Lucius did the right thing for a change. Looking forward to chapter 16*
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  • From slygriff21 on October 20, 2003
    Awsome story! I love this story. Please update again soon. I can't wait to find out what choice Malfoy makes.
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