Click Here!

Reviews for The Marriage Law

By : Witchcraft
  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on October 20, 2003
    Things are really getting going & am hoping that Malfoy, for once in his life, will do the right thing!!! Til your next update, Deb >^..^
    Report Review

  • From ANON - elvirasnape on October 19, 2003
    Just wanted to say that I still love your story. Yet I have a concern that I hope you might be able to address. I have reread the story cause I love it that much and when I got to the part of Lucius Malfoy getting married off to Ivy I got to thinking...What happened to Narccisa(spelling I have no idea), you know Malfoys wife and Draco's mother? I mean aren't they still married? or does she not exist in this story?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on October 18, 2003
    Yet another wonderful chapter... so much going on, what will Lucius do? Will be waiting for your next chapter*
    Report Review

  • From ANON - elvirasnape on October 18, 2003
    Well I think that Hermione and Severus should have twins, a boy and a girl. I think that the girl's name should be Casandra and the boy's name should be Justin. The reason that I think those name would be nice is because I have always loved the name Justin and also because the name Casandra has a mythological significance.

    Now with the union of Lucious Malfoy and Ivy I think that they should have a girl and name her Elvira....and this has nothing to do with my name. I just really liked the Elvira Mistress of the Dark movie and I think that since Malfoy is a death eater he might find that name to be quite fitting.

    P.S. That is one reason why I picked my name for this site, since I like Severus and since everyine thinks that he is evil well I thought that Elvira Snape was a nice match.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on October 18, 2003
    What's crawled up Madame Pince's backside & what does Severus have in mind for Hogsmeade? Looking forward to what's next!!! Deb >^..^<

    P.S., I think you might want to change some of the info about Ivy as Malfoy is older than 27. She's either older OR she wasn't in Malfoy's class OR she got a crush on him after seeing him while visiting an older sibling that went to school with him.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on October 18, 2003
    Chapter 11 was a good one!!! I vote that Hermione & Severus have one of each & Malfoy gets a boy, but I'll let others do the name picking;-) On to chapter 12. Deb >^..^
    Report Review

  • From ANON - GeekGoddess on October 18, 2003
    ok.....if Lucius is in the same age group of Snape, and Lupin....if Lucius new wife is 27...how is that possible? ok quick bad thought.....wouldn't it be cool if the ministry did all the deciding on who gets to marry who? what if they had decided to marry Hermione to Lucius? just a thought.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on October 16, 2003
    This is interesting & different than other SS/HG stories that I've been reading. There is a lot going on here & I will be watching for your next update. Deb >^..^
    Report Review

  • From ANON - mother on October 16, 2003
    If Draco is dead and Lucius has no heir, does that mean he will have to marry a muggle born witch to continue his line? That truly would be divine justice. This is a good story and I like the way the story moves from plot to plot without any obvious seams.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Kel on October 16, 2003
    Very, very good story! You've put in a lot of interesting twists and ideas, and it's very well written. But... all I can say about the last chapter - EW!!!! Yeah, Draco's an ass, but did you have to cut his head off? Other than that, kudos! - Kel
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Helena on October 14, 2003
    Man, this story is so right!!!
    I'm loving very line of it!! keep up the amazing work!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Catherine on October 14, 2003
    OMG I cant wait for the next chapter i just have to know what happens...ohhh Malfoy is such a cutie...what a brilt plt plan.,..but Severus oh how hot is he...brilliant man..:P Ohhh delicious....

    Catherine
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Lidra on October 13, 2003
    This is good. Just run through it and check for spelling and grammatical errors.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Helena on October 13, 2003
    more, more, more, more,more!!
    Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase!
    This story is terribly addictive!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Helena on October 12, 2003
    I just can't stop reading this,is stronger than me!!!
    I'm loving it!!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!